LastPaladin

This one a bit late UK wise but here it is in time due to uSA timezone. April 9th: Path Less Travelled Following the path trod by others, whether in ...

Greeting Eflwriter I'm LastPaladin, and like Flower and Elinor said this is nothing really, you don't make us feel anything you break the most important rule in poetry, 'Show don't ...

This is sequel story book and I recommend before you begin read Jurassic Park 2042 as it clear up anything. But this explain it in condense form. History The Dinosaurian ...

Andera, Royal Guard 'Hark how she assumes, Andera wouldn't hurt anyone!' The stupid girl countered 'What if Andera did, but Andera doesn't realize it?' I waited a bit, watching the ...

This is quite dark but it came to me and Hannah told me to write a poem which showed a scene. April 8th: Watercolour Beauty Paint a beautiful picture with ...

I knocked this off really quick, not completely sure of a theme, but here it is. April 7th: The Death of Reason Ardent supportors scream and cheer, it was meant ...

Bit late by UK standards, but better late than never. April 6th: Purposeful Mind Intropective realities confuse, dreams of times been, times had, times that ring like a story. Though ...

I don't like this one, but can't seem to think of any good ideas right now. April 5th: The Fools Sadness A jester sits on a rock alone, water washes ...

Greetings I'll be your reviewer for today, unlike the reviewer before. I felt this was in my opinion 'too emo' you overuse certain themes and you never truly explore them, ...

So since my character on a mountain I talked to Arriss and she is making another character human who's been sent to find out why people are going missing and ...

Hello, I'm LastPaladin and I'll be your reviewer, let me be honest I love this, but sadly this isn't everyone cup of tea, it's 'stream of concious.' which tends to ...

Hello, Riot, I'm LastPaladin and though this tries to do something new in this genre that needs some inspirations, it come across as contrived and very weak. You have floppy ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin I'll be your reviewer. I'll be blunt straight off, I didn't like it, but to explain why is that it's not a poem, it's only a series ...

This poem theme is extremely subtle so whoever can guess the meaning of it, deserves a cookie. April 4th: Rusted Aspirations Random synapsis flood the mind, memories of past call ...

Hello I'll be your reviewer for today. The repeatition got tedious after a while and it's no way unique. This theme is popular. And well it's zen, I admit but ...