LastPaladin

This came up on Abortion debate, basically, when do we ignore that rule? Which means life is sacred, but so many circumstances this very belief is ignored yet some people ...

Basically my argument is short and blunt, isn't it better that Abortion done in hygenic circumstances with no chance of infection and by a skilled professional. Whereas if you banned ...

Paul 2:50 -- Day 1 Finally calming down he glanced over to check on Sofie before glaring back at Gatlin. This wasn't the end of this he didn't doubt, once ...

Okay, here's today one. It's got a sorta musical quality, and again it's about me. Also thanks Navita, you're a huge help and glad you like my pieces. This is ...

This is for yesterday too, often my poetry only comes from one line I heard. April 13th: Visages You Fear Milk carton of the day shows another face another tale ...

Sorry for delay but was busy uploading pictures and otherwise playing Dragon Age. This one is pretty subtle but it is about me. April 12th: Emotional City Eventually all madness ...

After reading a terrible poem this is so refreshing, I have no complaint of this, the non-punctuations works well. And it really captures the quote. I certainly saw the scene ...

Sunset, expect this to be your last one with our vast return as your death is set. At three sixes where hill-beacons burn, run- In the darkness, undressed, blood-red, unfed, ...

Paul, Day 1--8:30 am Walking out into the warm day, he took a while for his eyes to adjust and he saw a sight which made him irritated. Right there ...

Paul, Day 1: 7:30 am The explosion, the explosion was felt throughout the whole building, and he was running not out of fear, with smell of smoke hitting his nostrils, ...

Thank you everyone and really I know can do better, I have so many poems to work on though because of NaPo but I'll work on this, I love idea ...

This is part 2 of the poem. I hate I realized but so be it. April 11th: Part 2: Boy Against Himself You remind of helplessness in state of chaos, ...

I had inspiration after a dream, and sadly it ain't happy inspiration it's reminders of what needs to be done. April 10th: Part 1: Ducking Reality Pathetic reasoning, of a ...

Only thing I'd correct is the fact what Elinor said. It works and I like it's jovial tone. I kinda wish you ended it at 'Have a jubilee' as this ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin, I'm sorry to say I didn't like this, but why you ask. Well it tries to be witty and it's not. It's not creative it's being navelgazing. ...