LastPaladin

Paul 2:00 am An air of menace washed over his face, not fear, not anger, just menace. Approaching slowly, he saw the girl looking around in terror, "Where's Sofie?" Nothing, ...

This poem is my completion of NaPo finally! The theme is obvious. April 30th: Tree of Life Beautiful roots, strike the heart, wonderful sensation free the mind. Prisoner of my ...

Here's another about me, this is advice to me, advice keep hearing, I love Waterfalls so this metaphor I have here, largely appeals to me a lot. April 29th: Swan ...

This is about another friend, basically she says even if she didn't know it was about her, she knew it was about her. April 28th: Masques of Magik Trapped in ...

As ya notice lately, most of my poems have had general feel good about them, and they're less negative. Here's next one. April 27th: A Knight Needs His Sword It ...

This is a poem that message is obvious. But as ya can see with poem, it's unsure. April 26th: Could it Be, Freedom She Sings? Missing... it was gone. My ...

TheNewHero poem gave me the idea for this one, it's quite political, but I like it, wish I could play an instrument would want to do a musical version of ...

NewHero this was interesting it was good in some respects but others especially second stanza it falls flat. Hello I'm LastPaladin and I'll be your reviewer. I see much potential ...

Paul: Time Unknown Stirring quickly Paul surveyed scene to see chaos. There were grown men and woman crying, screaming, or just plain begging. But he couldn't do anything, the leader ...

This is by far my favourite of today. It's subtle and I love subtle, I just love it came about. And am so impressed with it. And... caught up! April ...

This is the sole personal one of today. It's nice, nothing much else to say about it. April 23rd: Hit Again Illness of mind, of heart and soul, feeling you ...

I find this one rather questionable to be honest, but I need to catch up so got fling out poems no matter what now. It has it's good points, but ...

This came about after playing Dragon Age, and it's weird I admit, but theme is no doubt obvious here. So won't need to tell. April 21st: No Quo, No Status ...

He didn't much like last one, but this one he liked. And there is some things better about it. But I like both equally. April 20th: Neverending Riddles Questions and ...

Okay next two poems, are about a friend. So these ones are nothing to do with me. I just wrote them :). April 19th: Pauper King From Rags to riches ...