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Hayden MacQuinn: 9:15 am- Day 2 Hayden blanched, "Shit..." "You're MARRIED?!" Looking backwards and forwards, Hayden said nothing. "How can you be married?!" She took yet another step towards him. ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and this here has potential but what ruins it is the first line. You never let the readers guess what happens, you instead give it away straight ...

Andera: On the run - 10:00 pm This world was so different, Andera had no idea what to think. Those strange lights, the noise, the people. Being up on a ...

Hayden MacQuinn: The Bridge - 2100 Out of all the places Hayden wanted to be right now wasn't the Bridge. But hearing about Captain Riggs death, it had shook him ...

Hayden MacQuinn - Fighter Bay: 1330 hours "You are a beautiful baby aren't you sweetie." Hayden gave his Persephone Rage fighter a once over, admiring her sheik appearance. Out of ...

Hayden MacQuinn - The Cooler: 1300 Hours Light streamed in as the door flew open. Standing there, almost bored by all appearance was Hayden 'bestfriend' Lance the guard for Isolation, ...

I'm honestly impressed Lumi. But you don't wanna hear praise, it's dark, and I love dark, the title reference film I'm guessing? If not no idea. I like how you ...

This is the discussion thread for my latest storybook. As many have noticed the plot here is very flexible and if ideas can be displayed here we can easily debate ...

Paul 3:30 am - Day 2 He had failed, he sat alone on sofa, he couldn't keep up pretense of marriage anymore. He hated Ceilia, he hated her for what ...

Setting and Plot In the year 3680 humanity has finally perfected the use of lightspeed engines. Called the Hyden Engines. Named after Professor Nicholas Hyden. Humanity has explored the neighbouring ...

Jabber, I'm sorry, but I need this to progress, so posting under your character. Edit it as ya see fit. Or tell me how to fix it. Rose Banks ?:?? ...

It's become apparent to me lately, that many people don't do cursive writing, but what's even more odd, is I found that it's boys who do, cursive writing more, and ...

Now that's cheeky, I'm open minded, but but what they lost was their hardcore edge, which was what they put their selfs as, a hardcore rock band. And where as ...

They used to be good, but after Start Something they went seriously downhill. They had a great niche and great tunes like We Still Kill the Old Ways, Last Train ...

Hello, I'll be your reviewer, I'm LastPaladin. And well, the title to begin with does nothing. This should make it clear that this review is going to be harsh. This ...