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Re: Vagrant mother
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today and it's a sweet change or surprise to find a piece that isn't generic or an emo type poem ...
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Re: The Shadow and The Flame.
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for today, this piece is one of those ones that tries to be original, but when given the chance it fails, ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Silence
Greetings I'm LastPaladin, first I'm sorry to hear about your friends death and offer my sincere condolences, nonetheless, I can't offer much good words on how you demonstrated your upset. ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Angles
Hey Kamas as asked I'm here to review, now I'm not impressed perse but I'm not disappointed you delivered. But you don't want praise so I shall reread and we ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Sparsile
You know I'm not sure what I think of this part of me is impressed the other part is annoyed at certain things small as they are. I suppose I ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Moving Forward
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer. I wish I could enjoy these so popular 'woe is me' poems, but fate decreed instead I despise them with a ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Thy World - Cry of the slave
From first point of view this seems enigmatic, but as first impressions generally wrong, I read it a few more times. I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer for ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: happy never after
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer and to me this tried to be cliché while being cliché it's a pretty impossible predicament for you, the fairytale is ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Insomniac's Reality
Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, this piece tries and it's evident and for a first attempt it's pretty valid, I could even argue it's a valiant ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Dark Descent's Honesty
It's ashamed this starts out well then just drones and on and on and never really did what I expect it just could have gone many ways including descriptive scenes ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Cruel Irony (a metaphorical poem about people I know)
I am LastPaladin and I shall be reviewing your poem. I shall examine it thoroughly and decide why I don't like it, and why I think you should take my ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Dark Flame
Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, what we have here is a great metaphor used to it's absolute limit and often at times just comes across as ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Freeze
Interesting Lumi, very interesting, I'm not sure how to begin this review, so I shall begin with what I worked out, it's about someone dying or experiencing death in a ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Punishment
Punishment in America seems better than punishment here in Britain. We don't even have the death sentence anymore, which I personally think is a shame. At least they send people ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: I am
Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, considering what you said, I'll take that into consideration, that one it's old and two it was written for school. Both ...
Nov 25, 2010
