LastPaladin

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, first off I'm going to say it was a selfless move to write about bullying in such a true sense. That ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and this is very abstract and don't think I fully understand it. It's well written, and great use imagery but I'm truly nonplussed as what this is ...

Boy I can relate, I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer. I've read two of your poems so far and as of now this strikes me as your best, ...

Oi vey... how can I put this... this isn't poetical, it's not even that well done, it's just a series of answers for a question that doesn't even try sound ...

At times there comes a poem that really impresses me, in your case though the idea is so simple and everyday you still managed to convey a great deal of ...

For this piece Scar I'm apprehensive it's a good idea don't get me wrong but some of the stuff in it reads rather awkwardly, but perhaps I should explain this ...

Okay as requested here's my review, I hope you understand by now I'm harsh but it's only to improve the writing nothing else and in this case I see something ...

Sorry for delay on this, I've been meaning to do this a while, while reading it only one thing struck me and because of it this will be a short ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, in your case I think you tried too hard and it's clearly apparent throughout. It's hard to look deeper into this ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall be your reviewer, I felt after the second 'mellow' line I wanted to scream, not what you were looking for. This is just pure... ...

Hello I'm LastPaladin and in agreement with smorgishborg I have to say when doing this theme try be a little more original, but perhaps I should explain my thoughts in ...

To Paladin/Fontroy/Siegfriend- I remember you! Mostly as Fontroy, but I do seem to remember you being Paladin, too. I seem to recall we reviewed a lot of the same stuff. ...

Hello again Sol, I'm sad to break the pattern but I'm not as impressed with this piece as with your other one, it seems too slapdash, and a lot of ...

Greetings Solvalery I'm LastPaladin or Pal as you call me, I'm unsure of how to elaborate on my opinion of this because I don't felt completely understand, I'll give kudos ...

Wickedwonder was going to review this yesterday, but got too lazy, I apologize in advance. Now I shall begin, I think I better reread this to remember my thoughts, otherwise ...