LarryD

Thank you so much for the review! I will keep your points in mind.

I'm glad that you pick that up! :D

Hi, I really appreciate that you have given me some points that I need to work on! Thanks, I make sure to fine tune this soon!

I like that you had a rhyme scheme is some parts of this short. Maybe next time you could try prose or even in poem form? Also its fun how ...