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  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Dogs on a high hill

    Thank you so much for the review! I will keep your points in mind.

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Dogs on a high hill

    I'm glad that you pick that up! :D

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Dogs on a high hill

    Hi, I really appreciate that you have given me some points that I need to work on! Thanks, I make sure to fine tune this soon!

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Spring Cleaning

    I like that you had a rhyme scheme is some parts of this short. Maybe next time you could try prose or even in poem form? Also its fun how ...

    Aug 13, 2013


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