Lantalamiste

I actually found this completely by accident. I was googling Pen in the Clouds, the name of the collection of short stories and poetry that I'm editor of to see ...

Hey Ninja! LOVE your username! :D Ahhhh... I see. Tricksy thing! Will it count if I go back and edit it to make it longer? :P Ha, I write poetry, ...

This isn't bad, but it could use work. I totally understand what it's like to have to write a poem at the last minute and not coming out with something ...

Hmmm... I do like this, but I agree with Evi, it could use more. For instance, why can't 'you' resist? Where does this strong desire to kill come from? It ...

I REALLY loved this poem! It actually gave me chills. Very strong imagery, and excellent use of that image to illustrate your meaning. Awesome job!

I like this poem a lot, but it could use a little tweaking. The only thing I really have left by way of criticism that no one else has already ...

Hey all! I'm a 17 year old writer & editor! My username means "falling rain" in Elvish. :D Looking forward to reading & posting stuff! I've been checking out the ...