Lancrist

Thanks for your comments, Rieda. The story is actually at about, or just past, its midpoint. Half the reason that I introduced Perecos was for the sake of putting action ...

Part IV added. May be a bit sloppy, but since I haven't updated the story for a few days I was eager to add more. Thanks again for the review, ...

Part III added. Is anyone even reading this? :roll: Oh yeah and you have to be eighteen or older to read it now because there's one swear word. :shock:

Updated. There was a little bit added to the end of Part I as well.

The story's planned out, Squallz, don't worry about it. ;P Thank you both for taking a look. I hope you enjoy what's to come!

Thanks for the input, it was good advice and I've done a lot of editing. (Could you tell by the number of edits on my post? :P) More will come ...