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Re: embodiments of emotions (prologue)editied
Thanks and your right, when I posted this last night, I felt it still needed more detail. Ive tweaked it a bit so tell me what you think, (thought I ...
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Re: embodiments of emotions (prologue)editied
Heres a story im working on. I've edited it abit.Please tell me what you think and also correct my grammer(Big Time). Lancelot Knightly The night was dark, dense moisture in ...
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Re: Crescent Scar Scene
This story is heavy with dialogue. please rip this apart and tell me what you think. LancelotKnightly Cath watched as Vallen paced vigorously back and forth around the room. “Tell ...
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: Crescent Scar chapter 1(Edited )
This is chaper 1 of a story. It's been Edited thanks LancelotKnight Dry wind blew through a crack in the window gliding a gentle breeze upon Vallen’s face. The harsh ...
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Re: Crescent Scar Elena scene
Here's a short scene from a story im working on. Tell me what you think! Lancelot Knightly Elena awoke to the mice gnawing on her toes. Kicking them aside, she ...
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Re: Biggest Concern
Being a novelist is no easy task. Whether it’s coming up with a new idea or cultivating an existing one, there will be obstacles one must overcome so that the ...
Jan 30, 2010
