LanaBrown

Hey everybody please read this I promise This is my first romantic nove here on YWS so read, review and tell mw what you like and don't like. Thanks. The ...

wow this was so funny I love the Twilight/Harry Potter parody. I especially love how you made Bella clueless. Keep writing.:)

Dear Layla, Wow this is a powerful piece of poetry my favorite line was the last one. Keep writing I can't wait to read more of your writing.

Dear thestorygirl, I loved this poem and I can see that you have a good idea and flow. But it was a bit simple and really short. You should try ...

Dear FreakPunks, Okay, first off I wanna say that I really loved this story. The first thing that made me wanna read it was the title Hide and Seek it ...

Well everybody else pretty much covered everything so I gguess the only thing eft to say is I really enjoyed the story and keep writing. P.S~ a title should be ...

Dear Jas, Is there something wrong with you? Are you hyped up on too much Red Bull or something? How in the world could you think this is the worst ...

Wow I loved this story. I especially liked the way you made the character your own. You had few grammar mistakes. Keep writing.

Okay so heres the deal, I agree with Amnien and Warrior Princess. The wedding was rushed To much dialouge Peeta never speaks(at his own wedding...akward) Not enough desription And I ...

First off this is such a cute story I love Harvest Moon. I like the way Gray is nervous and I love the poem he wrote but,on that note, here ...

I would like a partner. I'm good at writing just about anything and i have butt loads of ideas just not that many points.

This is my first poem that I am submitting and I hope you all like it. :)

Night Shadow My night shadow is with me always by my side It is my honor my glory my pride My night shadow is light It shines in the day ...

Wow! Your I ddied tonoght poem was good. I would love for you to review my poem and tell me what you think.