Lampshade

This story, I must admit, is a tad depressing. If you intend to write a book or even a short story like this you should do extensive research first. I ...

Very good job Dynamo this is probably you're best piece yet. I'm sad you have to quit posting this story but I understand your reasons. For once I really don't ...

Good job Dynamo a very nice piece of writing I like how you got into the action as It caught me up in it and kept me hooked. However I ...

Good job once again Dynamo you 're story is very good. However as usual I have some comments. You never told us what people think of Darc at this point ...

Good job Dynamo nice story. I enjoyed this read a lot and have few things to comment about in fact I have only one thing that I think could be ...

Good job Dynamo nice story you got going! However I did have the same problem as Gyrfalcon don't just tell us the descriptions say things like this "The sun shined ...

Very good. Nice job Dynamo that's pretty good for a prolouge if you ask me. However I did have a question: Why did the bald dude talk to the scientist ...