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Story ideas... What might help is wrighting some potential characters down on a bunch of cards. A bunch of potential places down on cards, and a bunch of positions or ...

Non sensical lyrics are ok from time to time. Lord knows the beatles pulled it off enough. But the danger you run into there is that the work will start ...

This is a pretty good start. There are a few points, though. "cold and hard" this confuses me a little bit. Cold and... dank? Cold and... wet? Cold and hard ...

Um... way to be?

It is a nobel try for an assigned piece of semi creative writing. Much better than anything I've ever done for any class thats asked me to do it. I ...

I found this on google. A friend referred me, but I couldn't remember what it was called so I typed in the closest thing I could remember. This just happened ...

This has a, lets call it different sound to it. Different in that its not something I'm used too, but its neither a good or a bad thing. I had ...

There is something pleasantly off about this. The rythm reads a little weird to me, I can't seem to find it. But I like the rhyme scheme and the humorous ...

This is sweet. It lacks a bit in poetic style, but it more than makes up for it in the simple harmony that one could be left with.

Muchas Gracias. Thats actually exactly what I needed to hear. My original intent with the intro was to make it longer, and try to chronicle the entire myth of what ...

I'll gladly give up some points for a few decent reviews. I have 1000 or so right now to expend, and I'll be updating this constantly. (This has been sitting ...

Yeah, but we don't see the chinese do that every day. We can go to Tijuana and see everyone take a nap in the afternoon.

Muchas Gracias para the insight. And I think the mexicans are lazy thing started with the siesta they take every day. It gets so hot in the afternoon that the ...

That can't be right. There aren't very many in Isreal who fit that stereotype, I think.

I never figured out why this was such a big deal. Hunting accidents happen all the time.