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Um... ok? I don't get it. Again, this is too short to be interesting. This is a good starting point, but where does it go? What is it for?

I didn't get the second stanza. Its all good up until those last three lines. Before that, everything is great, and making sense, but that last bit throws me off.

Its too short to be interesting, and we get to the end and it isn't funny. In the context of a conversation this would be hilarious.

I think most people are counting on the contraceptives working, rather than accepting that they don't.

or third and fourth generation latinos, for that matter bobo.

I doubt that people that get abortions were thinking that they'd just hop on down to the clinic when they were having sex.

Tinech wasn't far from the crash site when it happened. He knew that others were not far behind and if there was going to be any salvage, he should grab ...

Name: Tinech Species/Gender: human male Age: 25 Homeworld: Coruscant Affiliation:None Occupation: Mercenary Rank: Dark Jedi Lightsaber Description: Blue and green. A double bladed lightsaber with sepe

I usually write across several mediums. Most of my writing, or the ideas for my wrighting is done during class. I'll get so bored that it will be the only ...

I don't know if you were being sarcastic or not, but like I said, its an interesting idea. It just needs to be taken further. Don't put yourself down like ...

Fetus' aren't alive, thus, cannot be killed.

The first thing I noticed about this was the title. It doesn't have the kind of ring that titles need to have. It will be the first thing anyone sees, ...

animals with long necks both frighten and intrigue me.

Anyone catch the first of the new season of south park? Is Darth Chef NOT the greatest character ever invented? I believe he is.

Theres a lot of good work in this. You make good usage of descriptions and such. But I can't grasp the idea behind it. Why is this 10 year old ...