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This is much much better than some of the other writing sites I've seen. Seriously. What other writing site has Pat Buchanan? There is always room for improvement, but this ...

This was interesting and enjoyable. I liked the quote/not quote bit. The last word confused me a bit, I wasn't quite sure of its purpose there. Most of the italicisms ...

Hilarious because its weird al.

7/10... I enjoy the funny creature thing. I pixellated this picture on my lonesome, then there were two!

Tinech opened fire on the light ship, growing weary of waiting any longer for it to land. It was hit hard with every forward facing weapon on his ship. Ion ...

This started really well, it was a fabulous first few sentences. And for a few lines, the language was good at setting the mood. But then you kept going with ...

Bush was all up in arms about it. Which kind of pisses me off, because this isn't the first time this has happened in Afghanistan since we've liberated the place, ...

(OOC: Yes, but Imperially speaking the Carrack Class' are pretty small ships. 20 heavy turrets, and no hanger bay, only 5 TIEs which attach to the top of the ship, ...

"Hey! You down there! This thing is picking up speed. I don't think its here for a scouting mission." More TIES approached. Tinech led them in loops around the ships ...

Fish n chips never really caught on in the states. Sure we have it, its widley available, but its not quite the same. Most restaurants kiddie menues will have a ...

He shouted as he ran for his ship "I hope you added those weapons, you slimey bastard." with a smile. As he aproached his fighter, he could already see that ...

I believe a chippie would be a place that serves chips. Or french fries, as we like to call them. Has anyone seen "A Fish Named Wanda"

I'll ask whats necesary when its necesary. Why would I wait for anyone else to do it? They don't know what I want to know. -Eric Well, why'd you do ...

For all intensive purposes, this is too long. Some poems can be long, but this isn't one of them. The Raven for instance, pulls off being long largely because its ...

“Why-” He pulled out his communication device and pressed the only available button. A clear pleasant voice responded. “Name please.” “Engineer's office” “One moment... authorization ple