Lalaland

This is my entry for Skins's novel designing contest. One of the recent parts of the novel included a cliff, so I thought I'd do something with that. I'm not ...

Hey there, Isha. :) Will you review the beginning of my realistic fiction novel, please? It's a little long, so I hope you don't mind. If it is too long ...

Hehe, thanks for the warm welcomes, guys! I'll be sure to ask either of you if I need any help with anything. :)

Could you review that for me, please? It's the first part of a general fiction novel I'm considering working on. ^^ Thanks in advance!

I've technically been a member of YWS for a while, but I've never really used it that much, which is silly really because I love the site. :) As of ...

Could you review the first chapter of a possible project for me, please? It's realistic fiction. :) It's a weeny bit long, so I hope that's okay. Thanks in advance!

TOL.jpg AN: I'm sorry this is a little long, so I really appreciate any reviews that I get. If you review this, I'll happily review something of yours in return, ...

I liked this a lot! I thought it was really clever and funny. I'm just dropping b to leave a comment really because there isn't anything I can think of ...

This was an interesting little story. :) If I were you, I'd try and make the structure a bit easier to understand. Make it so that whenever someone new is ...

Joining takes too much effort(I've gotten less done than anyone else here) Not technically. You've written the most. :wink:

Thanks for asking Elinor Bryn to review my story. I appreciate it. :)

Hey there Lily. Could you review my short story for me? There are two parts of it, so could you review the both of them? If it's not too much ...

Hey ultraviolet :) Thanks for reviewing my story, Love, Demise and Last Goodbyes. I really appreciate the reviews I get! I agree with the last reviewer; this was dark. Mind ...

Hey! :) Thanks for reviewing my piece, Love, Demise and Last Goodbyes. I really appreciate all of my reviews! Sorry this isn't going to be a proper review! Anything that ...

Hey Nike! Thanks for reviewing my story, Love, Demise and Last Goodbyes. I'm giving you a review as requested and to say thank you for my review. :) I disagree ...