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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: His Legacy - Chapter 1

    LadyOfTheDeathRoses here for a review, I have to say this is a brilliant first chapter and I really enjoyed it. I’m going to have to agree with my fellow reviewers ...

    Mar 14, 2014

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other
    Re: Review nice or don't review at all.

    I agree with you completely and totally. My first work was critiqued rather rudely as well and the second one I did was not much better. It hurt and like ...

    Mar 14, 2014

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fanfiction
    Re: Weeping Angels

    LadyOfTheDeathRoses for a review, Alright, I must say first of all I am Whovian so I absolutely adore this! Other than that I didn’t find many mistakes other than one. ...

    Mar 14, 2014

  • Short Story » Health, Narrative
    Re: Panic

    Hello, there LadyOfTheDeathRoses here for a review! I have to say this is an amazing and powerful piece of work, you put something that so many people suffer through into ...

    Mar 14, 2014

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Broken Noise

    First of all I will admit reviews are not my forte but I shall try me best! This is an amazing poem very emotional and fairly well written. But I ...

    Nov 15, 2013

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: "I'm starving."

    So first of all this is an amazing piece of work and struck a chord with me. I agree with what you're trying to get at. So many people in ...

    Nov 15, 2013

  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Re: That Girl

    First of all welcome to YWS. We're all a bit insane but I hope you like our family now onto the review! I must say this is an amazing and ...

    Sep 8, 2013

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: The more pain, the easier

    First I must say this is an amazing piece of work and I can relate to it a bit to well. Now onto the review! I agree with the reviews ...

    Sep 6, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: God took you from me

    Well first of all I'm glad you found a way to deal with him passing away. I've lost people as well so I know how difficult it is. My only ...

    Sep 6, 2013

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: "Are You Angry With Me?"

    Ok well first thing is first I suck at reviews and I will be the first person to admit this. This is really good. There are a few things that ...

    Nov 28, 2010

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: Serial Killer

    This was amazing and I really like it. Nothing like the warm blood seeping through my fingertips as I clasp the knife as tightly as I can. The feel of ...

    Sep 8, 2010

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: For Someone I Loved

    First off HI! Second of all I agree why is bedroom in bold and colored? That just threw me off. It was a very good poem I liked it alot ...

    Sep 8, 2010

When a good man is hurt, all who would be called good must suffer with him.
— Euripides