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Hi again! Sorry I'm taking so long to post, but school keeps getting in the way. So without further ado, the third installment of The Pirate and The Sister. Chealsi ...

Hi! Nagorm here! I'm going to start by saying this was rather cute. I'll move on to NitPicks Rod and I were just watching tv You've forgotten to put a ...

Very entertaining and well written! My only qualm was right here: Grab your coffee Grab a pen Grab some paper Come on! It kind of broke the beat a little ...

This is so wonderful! I couldn't find anything wrong with the grammar, punctuation, etc. This was amazing; Keep up the good work!

This is so wonderful! I couldn't find anything wrong with the grammar, punctuation, etc. This was amazing; Keep up the good work!

This is extremely intresting! As everyone else has said, you emphasised the kiss a little to much. The artist boyfriend seems very intresting as a character, he seems pretty dang ...

Finally, the second chapter is out! For those of you who've read The Ruler's Heir prologue, I've finally got a basis for the story and am done procrastinating for the ...

I couldn't find much wrong with it. It's a really good poem. The only thing that bugged me was this: And please don't tell them I'm what I'm about to ...

I love this. How could you think it doesn't make sense? I love the way you took a cliche such as this and turned it into well... this. I can ...

I love it so much! I can't nitpick it! It's all so true.... Brava!

Hi Skins! Seeing as everyone else has already done the nitpicking, I'll just tell you my thoughts on this. It was wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. I love the emotion in this. ...

Alright, as a person who has a strong love hate relationship with Twilight, I love this. Bella's speech was wonderful, I think Ebony had plenty of potentiol, though she should ...

Alright, this is an extremely short story (paragraph is a better word) that I wrote after a random comment from a friend. I figured I'd go ahead and post it ...

I felt like I should post something, seeing as I don't think I'll be posting on The Ruler's Heir for quite some time. Don't expect this one to be updated ...

I'd have to go with You are so undead to me . Dear God, I kind of liked it at the beginning, but the farther I got into it, the ...