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Re: A Deadly Game
Eetoo stood on his square of the stage-wood painted white, worn over the years by the feet that tread upon it-, his fist clenched and his jaw set. He examined ...
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: Tribute- Chapter 1,2, and 3
Welcome to YWS! I'm Nagrom and I'll be your reviewer today. I heard about you from my step-sister, Lauren B. She told me you'd joined YWS, so I thought I'd ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Miz Madison
This is wrote in the African-American Vernacular English dialect because it's narrated by an African-American slave girl. It's also possibly extremely racist, or extremely decent. PLEASE BE THE LATTER
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: heart of the rat
Hi! I'm Nagrom and I'll be your reviewer today! I have to say, this was amazing. The only thing wrong with this was the capitalization. I don't know if this ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: cornflakes
Hi there! I'm Nagrom and I'll be your reviewer today! First off, I'd like to say that this is very good! Your character is absolutely brilliant, and the tone is ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: The Pill
Thanks!
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: The Pill
I'm going to fix that in a second.
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: The Pill
The night was a cool, autumn one. The kind where the leaves break under your feet just right, the air is cool- but not too cool, just perfect- and you ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Seven Reasons Why Men are Better than Women
This was a very hilarious read! You have very wonderful grammar and sentence structure. I would write more, but I have to go soon. ~Nagrom
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: From the Shadows (contest entry)
Hi! Okay, so this is my first contest entry for YWS. You can find the contest details here: So, here it is! This is actually meant to be read in ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: The Twin
Hi! Nagrom here! Welcome to YWS, I'll be your reviewer for today! NitPicks Yesterday in TV-show he won a smile. In should be on, and you don't need a dash ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: The Villain's Hero (prologue)
Hi! I'm Nagorm and I'll be reviewing your story today! I'd like to say this was very interesting! I would definitely keep reading. Nitpicks The homeless, confused at the stranger; ...
Oct 29, 2010 -
Re: Romantic fantasy
Of course! You are very welcome. Yes, it was perfectly easy to read. You have a lot of talent!
Oct 29, 2010 -
Re: Some serious truth.
This is very beautiful, you're friends weren't just being nice, they were telling the truth! Absolutely amazing!
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: When The Strangers Came (Contest Entry)
Wow. This is absolutely amazing. It had me at the beginning, and as I kept reading the deeper it sucked me in. PM me if you win the contest!
Oct 28, 2010