Ladyinpurple597

She remembers the soft tendrils of his hair running through her hands, the smooth planes of his face, the soft line of his jaw. She remembers how his soft hands ...

I liked it a lot. It was very heartfelt and original. At least, I never heard of a song with lyrics like that so that was really good, in my ...

I'm sorry but I don't like it. I don't know, it's just....not right. But that's just me.

I loved this poem for its emotion and its depth. You use great word choice and will be a great writer one day if you decide to pursue it professionally. ...

I agree Solvalery. I think that you should make the stanzas and verses shorter and more spread out so it is easier to read. I loved the poem, anyway. Keep ...

Oh my gosh. That's all I can say. This was so good. The depth and emotion in this poem was so evident, it made the poem pop to me in ...

I usually am in to poems. I actually wrote one and posted it in the dramatic poem section. It's called ghost. I usually write some poems, but I also do ...

It helps a lot. Thanks so much! :D

Thanks for taking the time to review and give me suggestions. I really appreciate all of your feedback.

I loved the message and how you incorporated humor in the poem. It was well written, or at least some of it was. Some lines sounded a little forced, but ...

Do you know if you get points for posting blog entries? Or more specifically, what do you get points for? PLease answer me because I am dying to know. Thank ...

Thanks, I appreciate your kind words. I will take you up on your offer if I ever need help.

She searches the world Looking For the girl she once knew As herself She had a kind heart and a large smile But she got lost Somewhere in the past ...

Well... I'm supposed to be introducing myself... so, hi! :D I'm Ladyinpurple597. Nice to meet you. Ladyinpurple597