Ladyequine91

This type of poem is called a Tanka. I just learned about it, and started working with it (format is 57577-syllables) The sound of the drums Echoes sweetly in my ...

!Wow! that was...really really good. i liked it to because of all of the images that you have put into your writing! you have a very distinct style, which is ...

it seems like i just met you a few days ago and now you have evovled into this famous writer...*sniff* i dont know what to say! *wipes another tear* soon ...

that was really good! i...i dont really know what to say, the ending was great, and you put some really great images into your writing...*wipes a tear from eye* i ...

The one cries, No one hears her. It's no suprise, They just don't listen...they never do. On the inside she bleeds. Her spirit is dead. She is striving for something... ...

Wow! you put great images into your writing, which makes it very appealing to the reader! ummmm, you might want to check and make sure that you are capitalizing your ...

Why do you hate me? Is it because I am different, or because i am not you? Why do you hate my friends? Is it because they are like me, ...

Our story isn't over, It's just commercial break. Wherever I go- Your love with me I'll take. Our life together isn't over, And it will never end- Let me know ...

In the midst of lies, And trying to fit in, You can see how hard people try, To conceal what they have within. Conforming to the ways of what's "popular" ...

thanks, but i have to give credit where credit is due, the question thing was my teachers idea. she is a genius when it comes to writing, she has taught ...

Who? The one who ruined my life. When? November 28, 2003 Where? Somewhere between Annapolis, Maryland and Fort Wayne, Indiana What? He left me with no intentions of returning why? ...

Growing up behind your shadow, I never knew how hard it could be. Sufficating under your glory, It's funny, no one seems to see. I hide my pain from everyone, ...

Who can make her feel like the most beautiful girl in the room? That's what he's proud of. What deep pools of brown entice her everytime? Only his eyes. Whose ...

that is a fantastic first poem! good luck with more in the future!...really though, that was good! :wink:

guys, i have to confess, i as well have a love for food, it is like good. it is a shame that you havent seen chicago, you are really missing ...