Lady_Vampira

As much as it creeped me out; I really liked how you changed the numbers on the clock until it reached the Devil's Number. My only problem really is; you've ...

Thankyou all for your warm welcomes and offers of help! Alianna; I write all sorts of things; I'm most comfortable with fantasy and sci-fi. Favourite books... Love anything by Isobelle ...

I think it would be better to describe it like this; It's set in Germany, World War II, and follows the experiences of a young girl called Liesel who begins ...

I read it yesterday (I'm Australian), I promise I won't spoil anything! It was not bad; just as good as it's predecessors. One of my favourite things in SSat. is ...

It's not bad for an 'off the top of your head' thing. I can easily relate to the subject, however I think it needs more substance, if you know what ...

The rhythm and rhyming was extremely good; as was the 'story line' of the poem, not being something I have every come across before. It seemed to flow nicely, I ...

Once again; very good with the characters I'm looking forward to seeing if you have the moment where he turns her, some of Jacob's reaction would be very good also ...

Hello; I am Lady Vampira I have been writing for a while but would like others to critically review my work; (hence the reason I am here). I write all ...