Lady_Ariani

Thanks for everyone's reviews from part one, it's kept me going onto the rest! Enjoy: Crystalline - Chapter One, Part Two - Begin: “You did What ?” I grimaced, backing ...

Well, you got me hooked from the start. I must say that there's nothing better than a chick running off hot-headed and swearing uncontrollably. You get a real sense of ...

Okay, tenses changed. Will work on it more after the Easter break!

*laughs* Thanks for that guys! Also when you said Alice, I thought for sure this was a connection to the vampire tale Twilight book Smile is it? No, not at ...

Okay, I'm not looking at anyone else s reviews, because that'll throw me off and I'll think my review is small in comparison! And we wouldn't want that now, would ...

Thanks a lot for that, Music Lover! I don't know why I have such problems with tense. Perhaps I'm just not used to writing past tense, as opposed to present ...

Wow! What imagery! You certainly have a wonderful way with words, I'll tell you that :) I'd love to know if this is just a one-off piece or is this ...

thank you all for your wonderful reviews! They've really helped me a lot, not to mention put a few things into perspective for me! I now have this revised intro ...

Okay, so this is including the intro I posted earlier, plus the rest of the first half of the chapter. Thank you all for your wonderful reviews, it's helped me ...

I noticed this on the front page and felt compelled to read it in full from the first line. God. I hate that line. That and, "And how does that ...

Thank you both for your reviews! I feel much more confident in showing my writing now *grins* I am currently working on expanding just why the Blue Pole is so ...

Hey everyone, this is my first posting, so I'd love some of those wonderful reviews, good or bad! I usually write Young Adult fiction, and this in my first time ...

There is a wonderful little website: They review upcoming books as well as interview authors and many other things, and the best part? It's all about vampire fiction!!! It's been ...

Aaah, I'm glad I'm not the only one who has that habit then! I currently have about three different stories on the burner at the moment. I am most comfortable ...

I think the other reviewers have really said it all in just one word - WOW! Everything about this piece draws you in, the language, the setting, the prose. It's ...