LadySpark

That's not true! You've got a good start here, it just needs to be less ranty, more facty. ;)

@Zolen so you're saying that the only people who read romance are teenagers? Do you have any sources to back up this claim? I'd love to read them, because I'm ...

@Zolen, so in your opinion, if this is the way romance works, how is the romance genre still alive and working? If as you claim, it's boring and not worth ...

I don't like how through your whole review, you take pieces of what I said, and rant about them, when indeed, I gave explanations for them, and I was trying ...

Okay. First off, 1). To create friction in a relationship that developed too fast. I'm not sure where you're getting your information, but another relationship developing too fast has absolutely ...

@Burrow, post it under the rating you think it needs, and if it needs a higher rating a mod will change it for you. Just follow your instincts. If you ...

Metaphors are never a problem. Ever ever ever. I'm gonna assume you're talking about prose, but this can apply to poetry as well, I guess. Lumi's completely correct in his ...

I second Rosey! I love the plot you have going. Keep it on the side and come back later! I'd read it :)

I'm going to expand a bit on what Rosey said about blogs. Many, many authors nowadays are using tumblr a /lot/. John Green comes to mind, but there's hundreds of ...

love triangles, young women defined by partners.... I could go on and on. Check out this website for a bunch of ideas. Explore and enjoy.

There's still the question of parents. Do they realize what is going on? Do they believe the kids? Do they not believe? It's very unlikely a rich kid would be ...

I love what plot you have here! Santa being evil and taking over the world? Genius. I think the first thing you need to do is establish what the true ...

I personally edit better when it's paper and I can make notes in the margins, etc etc. But I don't want to print out a copy every time I create ...

It's very easy to find book like what you're asking for. Just go into a book store, or even on the amazon site and look up motivational or inspirational novels/nonfiction ...

For what it's worth, I think that critiquing any sort of unstructured poetry is a waste of time for you and the writer. How do you critique something with no ...