LadySpark

Simply: Don't. To some degree, it's as simple as that. Decide that you're not going to take forever, and move on. For every story, there's a different time length. A ...

I'm saying that it's up to you, but don't try to make your first draft perfect just so you can post it on YWS. Let your first draft just be ...

The great thing about YWS is that even if your piece is perfect, reviewers will find things to nit-pick! 8D No matter how hard you work, there's always going to ...

Yes! Go for it! Find your best piece of writing, polish it, and send it in. You may not get in, but you also just might! There's nothing wrong with ...

I need you to take a deep breath. And then another one. Because you're stressing out, and you think there's no way you'll ever write again. I'm here to tell ...

It is entirely possible for a people to have superior training and be peaceful. Some Native American tribes, for example, were a peaceful people-- but when push came to shove-- ...

Like Rosey said, find out when the payment is due! Also, the program might even offer scholarships or financial aid. Look for camps that specifically offer it then if you ...

Okay, I'm gonna try to do the best I can with this--but I have no idea what your plot is, so I'm not going to be much help. One of ...

Can you give us an example of this cheesy writing? Without actually seeing the writing, I can't really help you-- because I don't know how your writing is cheesy. Is ...

If you chose to go into writing in college, there's nothing that says you have to show a college you've written before then. You can chose your major and do ...

If you decide that you really just want it to be a simple romance story, you can always take the abusive father out. Like I said before, it's a little ...

I'm gonna build on what Rosey said. What I really liked about your plot is the vintage video game thing. It's quite original, I don't think I've ever seen it ...

First, I don't really understand why it's called the Vest Of Knowledge if it just holds stuff. It's not like the vest talks to you, or teaches you something. It ...

As a general rule, we don't delete topics. So, I'm just gonna leave it here, and you can edit it if and when you rewrite it.

Personally, and this is just because I like the names, I like Gregor and Lucine. Just cause they're cool. As for the name of your antichrist.... Azariah - meaning he ...