LadySpark

I'm not really sure how to answer your question, but I'm gonna try, mkay? I think what you need to do right now is take a step back and ask ...

The problem you're having is telling, not showing. Look at this to find out more about telling vs. showing. Luckily for you, it's easy to fix. All you have to ...

I don't think it sounds anything like the hunger games, considering the hunger games is all about a young teenage girl being so powerful that she takes over a nation. ...

I like the idea of magic costing something. What I think you need to focus on what it would cost, and how a wizard would refuel whatever they spent on ...

Is it only Morgana and Arthur, or did the knights come as well? What about the Queen? Or is Arthur attracted to modern people that remind him of his old ...

I'm gonna focus on the part where you say that this book is going to cover a span of three years. This one time, when I was in fourth grade, ...

It depends on the genre of your story, honestly. If you story is a romance, the first title is absolutely perfect. The other title is more fantasy sounding to me. ...

Happy endings are my favorite! As are stories of king Arthur. I do have some questions though. Are Morgana and Arthur aware of their past life? If so, do they ...

I'm gonna expand a bit on what Rosey said. It would be best if your piece was in first person so that you could display these two sides more easily. ...

What part of business management do you want to write a paper on? What is this paper for? Do you have to have sources? Where should you be getting your ...

You can literally write as much or as little as you want. There is absolutely nothing stopping you from writing random bits of consciousness in a note book and working ...

I'm not quite sure what your question is, to be honest. It doesn't look like much of a plot yet, and I really can't tell you how to write your ...

Is your plot fully fleshed out? If you only have a faint idea of what you want to convey, or wide gaps in your plot that you're filling with random ...

Dude if you wanna read something, just read it

Do you think you have more to offer to the world through this trilogy? You're not in the same head-space because you've grown. This is a good thing . This ...