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It is entirely possible for a people to have superior training and be peaceful. Some Native American tribes, for example, were a peaceful people-- but when push came to shove-- ...

Research.Research.Research. Has this person been deaf their whole lives? Can they hear a little bit with the aid of an ear piece? Are they completely deaf? Do they have learning ...

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@Nate Good. Keep it that way.

Like Rosey said, find out when the payment is due! Also, the program might even offer scholarships or financial aid. Look for camps that specifically offer it then if you ...

Okay, I'm gonna try to do the best I can with this--but I have no idea what your plot is, so I'm not going to be much help. One of ...

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Can you give us an example of this cheesy writing? Without actually seeing the writing, I can't really help you-- because I don't know how your writing is cheesy. Is ...

If you chose to go into writing in college, there's nothing that says you have to show a college you've written before then. You can chose your major and do ...

If you decide that you really just want it to be a simple romance story, you can always take the abusive father out. Like I said before, it's a little ...

I'm gonna build on what Rosey said. What I really liked about your plot is the vintage video game thing. It's quite original, I don't think I've ever seen it ...

First, I don't really understand why it's called the Vest Of Knowledge if it just holds stuff. It's not like the vest talks to you, or teaches you something. It ...

As a general rule, we don't delete topics. So, I'm just gonna leave it here, and you can edit it if and when you rewrite it.