LadySpark

okay, awesome! I think having the knights in it is a good idea, and will add a whole dimension to the story.

Out of curiosity, why only them? Why not everyone else? And I'm still curious, are the characters attracted to people in this world that remind them of their friends in ...

I'm not really sure how to answer your question, but I'm gonna try, mkay? I think what you need to do right now is take a step back and ask ...

The problem you're having is telling, not showing. Look at this to find out more about telling vs. showing. Luckily for you, it's easy to fix. All you have to ...

I'm in.

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I don't think it sounds anything like the hunger games, considering the hunger games is all about a young teenage girl being so powerful that she takes over a nation. ...

I like the idea of magic costing something. What I think you need to focus on what it would cost, and how a wizard would refuel whatever they spent on ...

Is it only Morgana and Arthur, or did the knights come as well? What about the Queen? Or is Arthur attracted to modern people that remind him of his old ...

I'm gonna focus on the part where you say that this book is going to cover a span of three years. This one time, when I was in fourth grade, ...

It depends on the genre of your story, honestly. If you story is a romance, the first title is absolutely perfect. The other title is more fantasy sounding to me. ...

Happy endings are my favorite! As are stories of king Arthur. I do have some questions though. Are Morgana and Arthur aware of their past life? If so, do they ...

Out of curiosity, is there anyway that word wars could be archived if they were created but not started after a certain number of hours? There are a lot of ...

I'm gonna expand a bit on what Rosey said. It would be best if your piece was in first person so that you could display these two sides more easily. ...

@Alpha but only when it's already raining, right? I've been told I make fantastic chocolate chip cookies. I can make almost anyone feel like the most important person in the ...