LadySpark

I really don't like that you call these stronger people parasites. It makes them sound like a disease, not powerful people. If your main character is one, you're going to ...

xvii. my not so world shattering love. the first heart you break is never the one you thought it'd be. when you imagine who's heart you'll break, you imagine Johnny, ...

xvi. //. i break the things i touch so i've learned not to touch anything to sit with my legs crossed and hands clasped like the lady i am . ...

@CelticThunder1438 you can post a link to a work in this thread or post the poem itself in the thread!

xv. a million ways to die sometimes you wish that you could chose the way you die. you sit in bed and you consider it, hard, for hours, and you ...

xiv. here's to getting out alive here is a collection of every me there ever was. here is me in fourth grade, with my missing tooth and freckles. here is ...

xiii. schlemiel; noun sometimes the person you thought you'd break isn't the person you actually do. sometimes, you're planning to snap somebody's world in two and suddenly you're the one ...

xii. ,. of all the things i don't understand puncuation is my worst subject i write puzzles in the form of stories in the form of poetry but it never ...

xi. this is a religion 1. i spent my mornings counting on my fingers how many times i screamed so loud i shattered your skin into a million broken pieces. ...

At odds with @Iggy I found If I stay to be very predictable and boring. The movie is actually much better, because they took all the boring parts out hahaha. ...

x. horoscopes; noun (false hope) i wish i knew how to read palms so i could tell you that every little thing is gonna be okay . i would take ...

ix. (a collection of dust between parentheses) they tell you when you're born the most important thing you'll ever do is die but i think the most important thing you'll ...

First of all, it's not the plot that makes a story bad or good. It's the writing. Your plot seems pretty run of the mill fantasy, so my question is, ...

viii. where the ocean leaves the sand one. i am everything you are not. a droplet of rain smearing the ink of your book, a grey mist hanging around your ...