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Re: How do you revise poetry?
my poetry revision often doesn't come until months (or honestly, years sometimes) later. Usually I'll open a blank document and the poem in another window, and then rewrite the poem ...
Mar 3, 2023 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
I think since I posted two works, did some reviews and have been on multiple times a day this year, we can tentatively back. I'm graduating in May with my ...
Mar 2, 2023 -
Re: The Mold Gets Moldier...
Congratulations!!!
Mar 1, 2023 -
Re: my house of bones (pt 2)
XVI. by the end of the summer, i'd packed by pinky swears and shipped them back to you. labeled: stop calling or else. all the promises made beneath your floorboards ...
Apr 27, 2022 -
Re: my house of bones (pt 2)
XV. it's simple astronomy the stars will always explode only in each other's eyes for you and i— so when your ghost left my skin, i still felt your breath ...
Apr 18, 2022 -
Re: my house of bones (pt 2)
XIV. Incomplete (Six) the year that everyone cried, i walked 400 miles up and down the boardwalk, searching for the names we wrote in the sand on our last day ...
Apr 16, 2022 -
Re: my house of bones (pt 2)
XIII. if i'm truthful with myself, my back lacks the strength it needs to stand up straight. i am a never ending curve, a bow bent backwards and out of ...
Apr 14, 2022 -
Re: my house of bones (pt 2)
XII. it's 2022, who has an answering machine anymore? your answering machine is a temporary message to the world: i am not home right now, but i will return again ...
Apr 14, 2022 -
Re: my house of bones (pt 2)
XI. Incomplete (Five) nobody will love you until you chase the demons out of your mouth before you speak. ... i wrote your name backwards to see if it made ...
Apr 14, 2022 -
Re: my house of bones (pt 2)
X. your chasm kiss me clumsy, almost not a kiss at all so that i can forget the sound of your ribs shattering on the floor after i dropped them ...
Apr 12, 2022 -
Re: my house of bones (pt 2)
IX. Incomplete (Four) the sound of ribs clattering to the floor. ... the feeling of ghosts passing through my skin ... kiss me clumsy, almost not a kiss at all. ...
Apr 11, 2022 -
Re: my house of bones (pt 2)
VIII. giving voice to 2 am thoughts sometimes you wish you could wake up dead. a taped-up heart discarded like a missing shoe, broken pieces on the floor scattered and ...
Apr 11, 2022 -
Re: my house of bones (pt 2)
VII. Incomplete (Three) the way your feet move when you're trying to go nowhere is a very telling thing. ... a cowboy standing on the edge of an ellipses ... ...
Apr 11, 2022 -
Re: my house of bones (pt 2)
VI. i'm so glad my cowboy doesn't know i watch him. when i watch him the cobwebs draw by from my eyelashes, and i can suddenly see the rocky heart ...
Apr 9, 2022 -
Re: my house of bones (pt 2)
I’m not saying any of this is good, or even close to good— but I love seeing these new themes pop up and seeing how they’re fitting into making my ...
Apr 7, 2022
