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LadySpark

the way you move your feet when you're trying to go nowhere is a very telling thing

  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Fire

    good,good,good I love a good tragic love story. it always make me sigh and this one was great! there are some grammar issues, but i usually don't go into that. ...

    Oct 9, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Taboo [12]

    Okay. everyone pretty much covered the grammar mistakes so I am just going to give my overall impression. 1. I am crazy about this book! its seriously good! 2. taboo ...

    Oct 9, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Decided To Break It~1

    Ok i'm back for a more in-depth review. this is crazy good! I didn't see any typos except for a few things here and there. you need maybe to go ...

    Oct 8, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: If we only had more time...

    good good good.... I really like this but there are a few nitpicks, its very sweet cause she like loves him and stuff. but a wish on that final goodbye ...

    Oct 8, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Draco's first Murder!

    I have a question: how is Draco in the dorm and then at his house?(just asking) I think this story was nice and i like the softer side of Draco ...

    Oct 8, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Amy Lynn and Matt

    Ok, overall this is a good piece. i don't go like in depth though I'm just going to give you my overall impression. There are some typo's so you need ...

    Oct 8, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The mary-rose society book 1:lormerls realm

    ok thank ya and i will check out those rules

    Oct 2, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Illusion

    first of all pretty good! if this is your poem keep writing. still needs some work

    Sep 29, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Decided To Break It~1

    i like this one. ;)))

    Sep 26, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Alone into the Night

    this is good but to short for any real reading. is this a preview?I have seen your other work and this is my least fav.

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The mary-rose society book 1:lormerls realm

    Okay maybe i flipped out and I'm sorry thanks for your feedback

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Wonders of Solitude

    wow thats good i like it. keep up the good work

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Too Good For You, Too Good For Me

    this is really good! keep it uP!

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The mary-rose society book 1:lormerls realm

    OK LISTEN IT WAS THE FIRST TIME I EVER WROTE A BOOK AND TO ME IT LOOKS PRETTY GOOD> BUT WHATEVER YOU WANT TO THINK

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The mary-rose society book 1:lormerls realm

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    Sep 23, 2010


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