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Re: Fire
good,good,good I love a good tragic love story. it always make me sigh and this one was great! there are some grammar issues, but i usually don't go into that. ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [12]
Okay. everyone pretty much covered the grammar mistakes so I am just going to give my overall impression. 1. I am crazy about this book! its seriously good! 2. taboo ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Decided To Break It~1
Ok i'm back for a more in-depth review. this is crazy good! I didn't see any typos except for a few things here and there. you need maybe to go ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: If we only had more time...
good good good.... I really like this but there are a few nitpicks, its very sweet cause she like loves him and stuff. but a wish on that final goodbye ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Draco's first Murder!
I have a question: how is Draco in the dorm and then at his house?(just asking) I think this story was nice and i like the softer side of Draco ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Amy Lynn and Matt
Ok, overall this is a good piece. i don't go like in depth though I'm just going to give you my overall impression. There are some typo's so you need ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: The mary-rose society book 1:lormerls realm
ok thank ya and i will check out those rules
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: Illusion
first of all pretty good! if this is your poem keep writing. still needs some work
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Decided To Break It~1
i like this one. ;)))
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Alone into the Night
this is good but to short for any real reading. is this a preview?I have seen your other work and this is my least fav.
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: The mary-rose society book 1:lormerls realm
Okay maybe i flipped out and I'm sorry thanks for your feedback
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: The Wonders of Solitude
wow thats good i like it. keep up the good work
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Too Good For You, Too Good For Me
this is really good! keep it uP!
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: The mary-rose society book 1:lormerls realm
OK LISTEN IT WAS THE FIRST TIME I EVER WROTE A BOOK AND TO ME IT LOOKS PRETTY GOOD> BUT WHATEVER YOU WANT TO THINK
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: The mary-rose society book 1:lormerls realm
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