LadySpark

hey guys, thanks for your reviews:) i wrote this in the moment and not with future planning or editing. first of all my poem got published!!! i emailed to some ...

dreams?? i have no idea but good poem :)

The imagery is great, but I think you should review and edit the poem and make sure it is really what you are trying to say before posting it. Also, ...

cfakc: yeah the mist idea is right spring fling: i wasnt really thinking what it was about it was somthing that happened to me personaly and i wrote it down. ...

all i can say is LOL and good job!

Heart of Glass I have a heart of glass, one hundred heart breaks weigh on my shoulders. I have a heart of glass, a punch from you is like a ...

In Honor of Granny "C" the best nurse ever, who died on Oct. 12 at 7:15 in her home. she will live with the angels... Losing a Loved One losing ...

thank you all! your comments really helped:) and thanks for not being harsh:)

i wrote these quickly and just copy and pasted from my computer so don't worry about being harsh :D :) :o 8) Mist The Mist clings to the mountains like ...

ok here is my review. I'm not going into the grammar right now but i gotta say: great job!!!!!!!! ok thats all :)

Awesome I'm your first reviewer!!!!!!!!!!!!! okay lets get started. but first the bolded part is the stuff that need corrections. the red is the corrections :) Look close to find ...

this is really good and i like that its a true story, it makes it easier to right doesn't it? okay time for nit-picking: Yeah, I know it seems like ...

ok i have a lot to say so lets get started: WARNING: i tend to review harshly so beware. An illusion, what is it? is it a trick, is it ...

i really like this version better. it more feeeling i guess you could say. :) I WANT A REVIEW!

hi! okay i have a lot to say so lets get to it! Chapter 1 Blackout. -Savannah- Last week- that’s when it happened, but no one has answers. No one, ...