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the way you move your feet when you're trying to go nowhere is a very telling thing

  • Other Poetry Re: losing a loved one

    In Honor of Granny "C" the best nurse ever, who died on Oct. 12 at 7:15 in her home. she will live with the angels... Losing a Loved One losing ...

    Oct 12, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: assorted poems

    thank you all! your comments really helped:) and thanks for not being harsh:)

    Oct 12, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: assorted poems

    i wrote these quickly and just copy and pasted from my computer so don't worry about being harsh :D :) :o 8) Mist The Mist clings to the mountains like ...

    Oct 10, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Kicking Like There's No Tomorrow

    ok here is my review. I'm not going into the grammar right now but i gotta say: great job!!!!!!!! ok thats all :)

    Oct 10, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Nature Of Art

    Awesome I'm your first reviewer!!!!!!!!!!!!! okay lets get started. but first the bolded part is the stuff that need corrections. the red is the corrections :) Look close to find ...

    Oct 10, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: One summer, two people and too much to handle .

    this is really good and i like that its a true story, it makes it easier to right doesn't it? okay time for nit-picking: Yeah, I know it seems like ...

    Oct 10, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Illusion

    ok i have a lot to say so lets get started: WARNING: i tend to review harshly so beware. An illusion, what is it? is it a trick, is it ...

    Oct 9, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Streams (New Version)

    i really like this version better. it more feeeling i guess you could say. :) I WANT A REVIEW!

    Oct 9, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Disenchanted. (Chapter 1, Blackout)

    hi! okay i have a lot to say so lets get to it! Chapter 1 Blackout. -Savannah- Last week- that’s when it happened, but no one has answers. No one, ...

    Oct 9, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Fire

    good,good,good I love a good tragic love story. it always make me sigh and this one was great! there are some grammar issues, but i usually don't go into that. ...

    Oct 9, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Taboo [12]

    Okay. everyone pretty much covered the grammar mistakes so I am just going to give my overall impression. 1. I am crazy about this book! its seriously good! 2. taboo ...

    Oct 9, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Decided To Break It~1

    Ok i'm back for a more in-depth review. this is crazy good! I didn't see any typos except for a few things here and there. you need maybe to go ...

    Oct 8, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: If we only had more time...

    good good good.... I really like this but there are a few nitpicks, its very sweet cause she like loves him and stuff. but a wish on that final goodbye ...

    Oct 8, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Draco's first Murder!

    I have a question: how is Draco in the dorm and then at his house?(just asking) I think this story was nice and i like the softer side of Draco ...

    Oct 8, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Amy Lynn and Matt

    Ok, overall this is a good piece. i don't go like in depth though I'm just going to give you my overall impression. There are some typo's so you need ...

    Oct 8, 2010


It's easier to come up with new stories than it is to finish the ones you already have. I think every author would feel that way.
— Stephanie Meyer