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Re: losing a loved one
In Honor of Granny "C" the best nurse ever, who died on Oct. 12 at 7:15 in her home. she will live with the angels... Losing a Loved One losing ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: assorted poems
thank you all! your comments really helped:) and thanks for not being harsh:)
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: assorted poems
i wrote these quickly and just copy and pasted from my computer so don't worry about being harsh :D :) :o 8) Mist The Mist clings to the mountains like ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Kicking Like There's No Tomorrow
ok here is my review. I'm not going into the grammar right now but i gotta say: great job!!!!!!!! ok thats all :)
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: The Nature Of Art
Awesome I'm your first reviewer!!!!!!!!!!!!! okay lets get started. but first the bolded part is the stuff that need corrections. the red is the corrections :) Look close to find ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: One summer, two people and too much to handle .
this is really good and i like that its a true story, it makes it easier to right doesn't it? okay time for nit-picking: Yeah, I know it seems like ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Illusion
ok i have a lot to say so lets get started: WARNING: i tend to review harshly so beware. An illusion, what is it? is it a trick, is it ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Streams (New Version)
i really like this version better. it more feeeling i guess you could say. :) I WANT A REVIEW!
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Disenchanted. (Chapter 1, Blackout)
hi! okay i have a lot to say so lets get to it! Chapter 1 Blackout. -Savannah- Last week- that’s when it happened, but no one has answers. No one, ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Fire
good,good,good I love a good tragic love story. it always make me sigh and this one was great! there are some grammar issues, but i usually don't go into that. ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [12]
Okay. everyone pretty much covered the grammar mistakes so I am just going to give my overall impression. 1. I am crazy about this book! its seriously good! 2. taboo ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Decided To Break It~1
Ok i'm back for a more in-depth review. this is crazy good! I didn't see any typos except for a few things here and there. you need maybe to go ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: If we only had more time...
good good good.... I really like this but there are a few nitpicks, its very sweet cause she like loves him and stuff. but a wish on that final goodbye ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Draco's first Murder!
I have a question: how is Draco in the dorm and then at his house?(just asking) I think this story was nice and i like the softer side of Draco ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Amy Lynn and Matt
Ok, overall this is a good piece. i don't go like in depth though I'm just going to give you my overall impression. There are some typo's so you need ...
Oct 8, 2010
