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i read a book and it inspired me to write this poem! :D hope you like it! be harsh in reviews please! ~pointe Mask Who is that who wears the ...

heres Chapter 2!!! Part II (James): I watched her from a distance; arguing with her father: her black hair streaming down her back in long strands and her lilac eyes ...

I wanted to do something romantic so here it is! ~pointe Prolouge: He stood there looking through the cracked glass of the town-hall window, his breath distorting the picture of ...

hi!! okay the corrections are bolded (like so) and my comments are in red ink It was an average day for James c ulist. he was a tall scrawny boy. ...

I think this is really sweet, so Im not going to nitpick :) just good job and keep it up :)

hey! Looks like I am your first reviewer!!!!! Im sonny by the way. the things i bold are things linked to comments my comments are in the red color:) Slowly, ...

Hey! Im Sonny and I am going to review your bio today. -ok this suddenly goes from *american salad bowl* to how muvh you hate high school thats random and ...

Ok this looks more like a short story not a poem. And its random. I hate randomness (LOL) If this is a real experince i apoligize. If not well im ...

Ok this looks more like a short story not a poem. And its random. I hate randomness (LOL) If this is a real experince i apoligize. If not well im ...

TheJennaRaiton The point of this poem was for the user to answer the questions not tear apart my poem!!!! God that was rude! But whatever you think. But for future ...

This is a quick poem that just waltzed into my head :) hope you like it Purple What is purple? The color purple means Sunset, Beauty, Love Purple Is the ...

hi I'm SOnny and I will giving you a review today :) I don’t see why we should lose a daughter when guards can do a perfectly good job.” I ...

hmmm........ This makes me wonder a little bit. The water chattered and danced across the rocks. It sashayed along the banks and swirled around with joy. The trees were shrouded ...

I like this alot! i hope your english teacher gave you a good grade as well. Little fast with their relationship I think I like the part about gabriel crying ...

I need to know what happened to Dan! i am going crazy!!!!!