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Re: Semi Biography of the Moment
Hey! Im Sonny and I am going to review your bio today. -ok this suddenly goes from *american salad bowl* to how muvh you hate high school thats random and ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Say This is a Title
Ok this looks more like a short story not a poem. And its random. I hate randomness (LOL) If this is a real experince i apoligize. If not well im ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Say This is a Title
Ok this looks more like a short story not a poem. And its random. I hate randomness (LOL) If this is a real experince i apoligize. If not well im ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Purple
TheJennaRaiton The point of this poem was for the user to answer the questions not tear apart my poem!!!! God that was rude! But whatever you think. But for future ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Purple
This is a quick poem that just waltzed into my head :) hope you like it Purple What is purple? The color purple means Sunset, Beauty, Love Purple Is the ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Cat Steps Chapter 1: Draft
hi I'm SOnny and I will giving you a review today :) I don’t see why we should lose a daughter when guards can do a perfectly good job.” I ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Freedom [Edited : 29 Jan.]
hmmm........ This makes me wonder a little bit. The water chattered and danced across the rocks. It sashayed along the banks and swirled around with joy. The trees were shrouded ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: How Rain was Created
I like this alot! i hope your english teacher gave you a good grade as well. Little fast with their relationship I think I like the part about gabriel crying ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: Many a Night Has Passed
I need to know what happened to Dan! i am going crazy!!!!!
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: losing a loved one
hey guys, thanks for your reviews:) i wrote this in the moment and not with future planning or editing. first of all my poem got published!!! i emailed to some ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: In My Dreams
dreams?? i have no idea but good poem :)
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: heart of glass
The imagery is great, but I think you should review and edit the poem and make sure it is really what you are trying to say before posting it. Also, ...
Oct 17, 2010 -
Re: assorted poems
cfakc: yeah the mist idea is right spring fling: i wasnt really thinking what it was about it was somthing that happened to me personaly and i wrote it down. ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter Rapping Battle
all i can say is LOL and good job!
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: heart of glass
Heart of Glass I have a heart of glass, one hundred heart breaks weigh on my shoulders. I have a heart of glass, a punch from you is like a ...
Oct 12, 2010