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Perfect! it helps ssssiooooo much

oh you guys are soo nice!!! thanks for your reviews!!!

thank you a.s. for your review:)

this is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i absolutly love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hi wicked! okay I am going to review you today :) my corrections are bolded and my comments in red my additions are in blue and the cancelation are marked ...

okay I'm back to apoligize for being so harsh before :) its awesome

thanks guys! BTW chapter 2 is posted as weel soooooooo.... check it out!!!!!!!!!!

hey! looks like I'm your first reviewer! I love it when that happens! okay here is my review (corrections are bolded comments in red Are we infatuated? Or are we ...

i took the review into consideration for the other mist poem and re-wrote it. ~pointe Mist The Mist clings to the tops of mountains like crowns The Mist hovers over ...

i read a book and it inspired me to write this poem! :D hope you like it! be harsh in reviews please! ~pointe Mask Who is that who wears the ...

heres Chapter 2!!! Part II (James): I watched her from a distance; arguing with her father: her black hair streaming down her back in long strands and her lilac eyes ...

I wanted to do something romantic so here it is! ~pointe Prolouge: He stood there looking through the cracked glass of the town-hall window, his breath distorting the picture of ...

hi!! okay the corrections are bolded (like so) and my comments are in red ink It was an average day for James c ulist. he was a tall scrawny boy. ...

I think this is really sweet, so Im not going to nitpick :) just good job and keep it up :)

hey! Looks like I am your first reviewer!!!!! Im sonny by the way. the things i bold are things linked to comments my comments are in the red color:) Slowly, ...