LadySpark

okay guys listen up: ~the main character is a girl names AnnaLea ~they are fleeing because she and Lassa found out something they shouldn't have about the country Kato ~it ...

hey wicked here to give you a review! 4/11/11 why is this here? what exactly does it mean? He led me on. I swear it, He led me on. All ...

hey! pointe here as requested! Why won't the words come? I know how I feel, and yet they are still stuck inside my head. this seems to not fit with ...

Thanks for your reviews everyone!

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this is a new novel I'm working on :) One: AnnaLea: I guessed Ma assumed this would be easy. Father Townsend knew better. When we left our small apartment and ...

people have these things like: want a review click here and then it shows what they will review. how do you make a will review thing? cause its really bugging ...

HI! I'm pointe and I'll be reviewing you today! just a few things first ~when something is bolded look for a red comment some where. ~ Blue means addition to ...

thank you ladypurple !

this is the first in a series called the wood series (poems) check it out! link to my portfolio: The Midnight wolf The snow falls, Onto the dark, hard ground. ...

When you told me you loved me I was so happy. You held me close and whispered in my ear. I loved you. You Loved me. Or so I thought.... ...

hey WP! (thats your new nickname by the way) I'm going to review you today! Dear October, I like how this starts out,very personal What can I say of you ...

the first chapter I wrote a LONG time ago so the fire bird chapter 2 is a little more up to date

MUCH BETTER! but there are still a few corrections I have :) the format is hard to read. for example: jack went up the hill with jill Makes it harder ...