LadySpark

this is a new novel I'm working on :) One: AnnaLea: I guessed Ma assumed this would be easy. Father Townsend knew better. When we left our small apartment and ...

people have these things like: want a review click here and then it shows what they will review. how do you make a will review thing? cause its really bugging ...

HI! I'm pointe and I'll be reviewing you today! just a few things first ~when something is bolded look for a red comment some where. ~ Blue means addition to ...

thank you ladypurple !

this is the first in a series called the wood series (poems) check it out! link to my portfolio: The Midnight wolf The snow falls, Onto the dark, hard ground. ...

When you told me you loved me I was so happy. You held me close and whispered in my ear. I loved you. You Loved me. Or so I thought.... ...

hey WP! (thats your new nickname by the way) I'm going to review you today! Dear October, I like how this starts out,very personal What can I say of you ...

the first chapter I wrote a LONG time ago so the fire bird chapter 2 is a little more up to date

MUCH BETTER! but there are still a few corrections I have :) the format is hard to read. for example: jack went up the hill with jill Makes it harder ...

Hi! I'm pointe and I am going to review you real quick:) this is the perfect tragic love story (i love those!) and it awesomely written. GOOD JOB! and keep ...

hey I'm pointe and i will be reviewing you today! the first part is fine so I wont even go into it “Mandi, do you want bacon with your eggs?” ...

remember when we stood on the pier, looking out on the water; remember when you held my hand. you whispered in my ear, you said you loved me. remember when, ...

hey! Im pointe and I will be reviewing you today corrections are bolded , comments in red , additions in blue and cancelations in strikeout I wrote this just because ...

thanks for the reviews guys!!!! they helped alot!

hi! I am pointe and I am reviewing you today :) my corrections are bolded my comments in red additions in blue and cancels striked out I never thought this ...