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Re: Mask
I can't remember the name of it now, I wrote this poem before I came to YWS
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Love
OHMIGOSH... I feel soo horrible for your friend. Please tell them us here at YWS hope she recovers.... The two girls sat in the back seat of the little blue ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Winter Bloom [edited yet again]
HI [user]meep(:[/user]! I'm going to review you today, because I used all my points posting chapters to my novels. She scatters seeds in the snow, her alabaster skin melting into ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: firebird chapters 3-5
I'm in a rut with this book. PLEASE tell me if you think I should continue :) III (Zalia): TV’s were blaring from abandoned homes, talking about the bombing in ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: the voyage of Kato [9&10]
this is the last of the chapters I have written so far. NOT reviewed very much SO PLEASE focus on grammar. :) offical club out!: thanks for your reviews in ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
PLLLLLLLLLLLEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSE
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: the x-ray
I see we agree ForestGreen808 I personally think its totally ridiculous. I doubt a lot of people are going to fly unless they really want to be touched. Its nasty ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Any good books I can try?
~the hunger games (the hunger games, catching fire, mocking jay) Harry Potter
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Books that were made into GOOD movies
to kill a mocking bird, gone with the wind
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: the x-ray
what do you guys/gals think of the new law that you must when boarding a plane either be PATTED DOWN (i.e. a stranger touching your personal areas) or X-RAYED (i.e. ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Global Warming - The Turning Point
there is no such thing as global warning. proof: ~the only people who talk about global warning are politicians who have a political agenda to push or crazy, phsyco environmentalists ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: A Depressed God
hi! I'm pointe and I'm going to review you today! A statue stands high as can be, outshining stars, and comets as far as eye can see. On a plinth ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: A Paladin's Acts of Kindness - My Review Thread (Open)
would you please review my poem Mask? thanks Pointe p.s. please PM me when your done ;)
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
Come on guys! do I have to beg?
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Your request makes me so happy!
Hi Yurii! could you please review my poem Mask? thanks, ~pointe
Nov 27, 2010
