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LadySpark

the way you move your feet when you're trying to go nowhere is a very telling thing

  • Other Poetry Re: Mask

    I can't remember the name of it now, I wrote this poem before I came to YWS

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Love

    OHMIGOSH... I feel soo horrible for your friend. Please tell them us here at YWS hope she recovers.... The two girls sat in the back seat of the little blue ...

    Nov 29, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Winter Bloom [edited yet again]

    HI [user]meep(:[/user]! I'm going to review you today, because I used all my points posting chapters to my novels. She scatters seeds in the snow, her alabaster skin melting into ...

    Nov 29, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: firebird chapters 3-5

    I'm in a rut with this book. PLEASE tell me if you think I should continue :) III (Zalia): TV’s were blaring from abandoned homes, talking about the bombing in ...

    Nov 29, 2010
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: the voyage of Kato [9&10]

    this is the last of the chapters I have written so far. NOT reviewed very much SO PLEASE focus on grammar. :) offical club out!: thanks for your reviews in ...

    Nov 29, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*

    PLLLLLLLLLLLEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSE

    Nov 29, 2010
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: the x-ray

    I see we agree ForestGreen808 I personally think its totally ridiculous. I doubt a lot of people are going to fly unless they really want to be touched. Its nasty ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Media Reviews Re: Any good books I can try?

    ~the hunger games (the hunger games, catching fire, mocking jay) Harry Potter

    Nov 27, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Books that were made into GOOD movies

    to kill a mocking bird, gone with the wind

    Nov 27, 2010
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: the x-ray

    what do you guys/gals think of the new law that you must when boarding a plane either be PATTED DOWN (i.e. a stranger touching your personal areas) or X-RAYED (i.e. ...

    Nov 27, 2010
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Global Warming - The Turning Point

    there is no such thing as global warning. proof: ~the only people who talk about global warning are politicians who have a political agenda to push or crazy, phsyco environmentalists ...

    Nov 27, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Depressed God

    hi! I'm pointe and I'm going to review you today! A statue stands high as can be, outshining stars, and comets as far as eye can see. On a plinth ...

    Nov 27, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: A Paladin's Acts of Kindness - My Review Thread (Open)

    would you please review my poem Mask? thanks Pointe p.s. please PM me when your done ;)

    Nov 27, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*

    Come on guys! do I have to beg?

    Nov 27, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Your request makes me so happy!

    Hi Yurii! could you please review my poem Mask? thanks, ~pointe

    Nov 27, 2010


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