LadySpark

kay, this is awesome! I'll come back and do a better review later but heres a note: when adding work to a pre-published work: it's better to hit the edit ...

dedicated to my little sister who is the most innocent flower in the world go gentle please! I know it's short but thats how I like it :) An angel ...

hey fellow P.C.! please review my novel Firebird

hi Shubbi, please review my novel FireBird.. and at the end please tell me if you want me to continue or not... ~pointe

interjections should be your best friend! ~interjections show excitement or emotion, their general sat apart by an exclamation point or by comma when the feelings not as strong. ~so when ...

a co-author for a book about called reflecton, I have a basic plot worked out. PM for it!

HI! I'm pointe and I'll be reviewing you today! "Large latte, please." AWESOME! i love it when a story/chapter begins with speech! I said in a timmid voice to the ...

awwwwwwwwwwww come on! I'm on my knees now!

that's awesome Vulcan Thanks everyone for your opinions!

I can't remember the name of it now, I wrote this poem before I came to YWS

OHMIGOSH... I feel soo horrible for your friend. Please tell them us here at YWS hope she recovers.... The two girls sat in the back seat of the little blue ...

HI [user]meep(:[/user]! I'm going to review you today, because I used all my points posting chapters to my novels. She scatters seeds in the snow, her alabaster skin melting into ...

I'm in a rut with this book. PLEASE tell me if you think I should continue :) III (Zalia): TV’s were blaring from abandoned homes, talking about the bombing in ...

this is the last of the chapters I have written so far. NOT reviewed very much SO PLEASE focus on grammar. :) offical club out!: thanks for your reviews in ...

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