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Re: The Stargazer {Part 1}
I keep getting ideas for better novels and forget the old ones...... this is a cross between fantasy and romance, but I characterized it as fantasy the club page: girl ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Interjections!
goodness! I was just trying to help people! you don't have to go crazy! goodness!
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
done skins....
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two)
HI! pointe2drama here for the final ch. you have posted. Grammar: well, its good but there is some slang I have no idea what it is. Duw? Ta? etc. Storyline/Flow: ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter One)
hi! back for ch.1 OVERALL: Grammar: perfect as always, except you don't spell realize realise.. you spell it REALIZE STORYLINE/FLOW: much, much better. MUCH BETTER! not by my point of ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Prologue)
HI Skins! here as requested... I'm going to give you my overall impression by just reading it: Grammar: Excellent, no problems what's so ever. Storyline/flow: though I like how much ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Cleared for disaster.
kay, this is awesome! I'll come back and do a better review later but heres a note: when adding work to a pre-published work: it's better to hit the edit ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: An angel sent from heaven above
dedicated to my little sister who is the most innocent flower in the world go gentle please! I know it's short but thats how I like it :) An angel ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*
hey fellow P.C.! please review my novel Firebird
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
hi Shubbi, please review my novel FireBird.. and at the end please tell me if you want me to continue or not... ~pointe
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Interjections!
interjections should be your best friend! ~interjections show excitement or emotion, their general sat apart by an exclamation point or by comma when the feelings not as strong. ~so when ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Looking For A Partner
a co-author for a book about called reflecton, I have a basic plot worked out. PM for it!
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: sweet sixteen and never been kissed part one
HI! I'm pointe and I'll be reviewing you today! "Large latte, please." AWESOME! i love it when a story/chapter begins with speech! I said in a timmid voice to the ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
awwwwwwwwwwww come on! I'm on my knees now!
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: the x-ray
that's awesome Vulcan Thanks everyone for your opinions!
Nov 30, 2010