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Re: Christmas heartbreak
The lights twinkle through the window, welcoming me in. Your arms wrap around me like a blanket, keeping me warm by the fire. But it's all for nothing. I gave ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Let's Just Say...
Hi! Pointe here as requested! I didn't get it till the end but this is two little girls playing dress up. I like it, though at the beginning I didn't ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Bouquet of Bruises *edited*
hi! pointe2drama here as requested! Scarlet petals leaked from her skin, nice intearesting way to say blood danced between torn pores to the world above, a rose perfume strong enough ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
everyone else is going to have to wait for a while
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: The Thoughts Inside My Heart
hi, Pointe here as requested. First of all thank you for saying my work is impressive, if you ever have the time please review some! Not long ago I shared ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Know I'm Here(1)
hi shubbi, Pointe here as requested. AMY: The screeching of the chalk against the blackboard coincided with the prom night being replayed inside my head. The flashing lights, the disco ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: The Stargazer {part 2 }
I tried to slow stuff down a bit. lots more thoughts and environment. this is just the 1 ch. so please tell me what you think! One: Jeremy and Aniline ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
PLEASE ASK FOR THE REVIEWS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: The Lost hero
OMG, that was the best book ever! But it made me cry that Percy might have forgotten AnnaBeth and MIGHT kiss another girl!!!!!!!!IT's torturing! I can't wait until next fall!
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: One way trip to Mars?
I read a book called the GREEN BOOK (yeah i know, lousy title) and it accutally talks about the people fleeing to Mars because Earth is destroyed. What if this ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Top Ten Reasons Why Women Are Better Than Men!
totally a one sided sexist argument.....
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Chapter One + Two
this is awesome! keep it up and update me when you post the next chapter
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Never Done Dancing
he MilkandCookies! I'm here to review! Every step makes the drums beat faster. why? make this more explanatory every step keeps on strengthening my call. REPLACE this part is good. ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: The Stargazer {Part 1}
PLEASE!
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: The Stargazer {Part 1}
Please Review!
Dec 8, 2010
