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Re: The Stargazer {part 2 }
I tried to slow stuff down a bit. lots more thoughts and environment. this is just the 1 ch. so please tell me what you think! One: Jeremy and Aniline ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
PLEASE ASK FOR THE REVIEWS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: The Lost hero
OMG, that was the best book ever! But it made me cry that Percy might have forgotten AnnaBeth and MIGHT kiss another girl!!!!!!!!IT's torturing! I can't wait until next fall!
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: One way trip to Mars?
I read a book called the GREEN BOOK (yeah i know, lousy title) and it accutally talks about the people fleeing to Mars because Earth is destroyed. What if this ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Top Ten Reasons Why Women Are Better Than Men!
totally a one sided sexist argument.....
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Chapter One + Two
this is awesome! keep it up and update me when you post the next chapter
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: Never Done Dancing
he MilkandCookies! I'm here to review! Every step makes the drums beat faster. why? make this more explanatory every step keeps on strengthening my call. REPLACE this part is good. ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: The Stargazer {Part 1}
PLEASE!
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: The Stargazer {Part 1}
Please Review!
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: The Stargazer {Part 1}
I keep getting ideas for better novels and forget the old ones...... this is a cross between fantasy and romance, but I characterized it as fantasy the club page: girl ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Interjections!
goodness! I was just trying to help people! you don't have to go crazy! goodness!
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
done skins....
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two)
HI! pointe2drama here for the final ch. you have posted. Grammar: well, its good but there is some slang I have no idea what it is. Duw? Ta? etc. Storyline/Flow: ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter One)
hi! back for ch.1 OVERALL: Grammar: perfect as always, except you don't spell realize realise.. you spell it REALIZE STORYLINE/FLOW: much, much better. MUCH BETTER! not by my point of ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Prologue)
HI Skins! here as requested... I'm going to give you my overall impression by just reading it: Grammar: Excellent, no problems what's so ever. Storyline/flow: though I like how much ...
Dec 6, 2010