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Re: Short Paragraphs
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Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: New Year's Romance
A little something I came up with after daydreaming for an hour. New Year’s romance Lila stood at the edge of the street, almost in the road. The flashing, multi ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: The Landing House *accepting charecters*
thats up to the SBookers, like you, I hope. And in future PLEASE PM me with these kind of things. I don't want to clot this thread with comments about ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Igneous Rock Ch.1 Part 1
Hi narniafreak, sorry it took so long. I hadn't checked my WRFF thread in a while. So lets get started! I'm doing an overall review for you today :) Grammar: ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: The Landing House *accepting charecters*
The Landing ~there is an orphanage on a hill, and all the children in it are extraordinary This storybook is about the adventures the children have. Rules: No Romance (except ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Christmas heartbreak
thanks all you peoples who have reviewed this, my BFF suffered a heartbreak and I had this brilliant idea to turn it into a short story/poem :) luvs to all, ...
Dec 25, 2010 -
Re: Racism
do you believe there is such thing as racism? Or did it die with the civil war. I personally think that there is no such thing. We all have our ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*
hey born, have time to review the rest of part 2?
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: You decide (:
continue!
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Christmas heartbreak
The lights twinkle through the window, welcoming me in. Your arms wrap around me like a blanket, keeping me warm by the fire. But it's all for nothing. I gave ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Let's Just Say...
Hi! Pointe here as requested! I didn't get it till the end but this is two little girls playing dress up. I like it, though at the beginning I didn't ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Bouquet of Bruises *edited*
hi! pointe2drama here as requested! Scarlet petals leaked from her skin, nice intearesting way to say blood danced between torn pores to the world above, a rose perfume strong enough ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
everyone else is going to have to wait for a while
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: The Thoughts Inside My Heart
hi, Pointe here as requested. First of all thank you for saying my work is impressive, if you ever have the time please review some! Not long ago I shared ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Know I'm Here(1)
hi shubbi, Pointe here as requested. AMY: The screeching of the chalk against the blackboard coincided with the prom night being replayed inside my head. The flashing lights, the disco ...
Dec 14, 2010
