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Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
Mikko: done!
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Cartora (Chapter 3)
Hi Mikko!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! here as requested!! So, I am going to do an overall, then go to our joint account and do nit-picks okay? its a win-win-win! Grammar: Pretty good, I ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Him- A poem
this is just a poem I wrote, spur of the moment (I know its bad>) Him Who is the one they call Him? The one who broke the Queen’s heart? ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Coal Miner's daughter
I haven't written poetry in a while, so I may be a little rusty. I am a coal miner's daughter. I grew up in the backwoods of West Virginia. My ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Something in my closet
Hello! I am Pointe and I will be reviewing you today!!! There's something in my closet, A nd it's growing quite loud , I t giggles and it scratches . ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
Tabby Done, any more takers?
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Forget the World~1
OHMIGOSH! I love it. I seriously do. The grammar is correct, everything. You got the dialogue correct, and even made it feel believeble. You made me want to scream at ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
done! any other takers???
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Snow- Ch. 3
This chapter was kind of a struggle for me. i know its not as good as the others XD ~pointe CLUB IS UP! I will give you cookies and milk ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*
hi Mommmy, new novel (how many times have I said that?) anyway its called Snow and is a twist of the classic snow white this is a link to chapter ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Snow- chapter 2
Here is chapter 2, I know its short, but I can't decide whats going to happen to make it twisty XD ____ Chapter II: The cool midnight breeze blew across ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Once Again
Hi! here for your requested review! first of all congrats on the green! thoughts: 1)this could easily be a novel. A very GOOD novel. Consider that.... 2) your choice of ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Would you rather....
moisturizer. would you rather never be able to read again, or only have 1 person (a person you really hate) to talk to?
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Snow- Preface and ch. 1
A twist on the classic tale Snow white. I decided to do a twist on a classic tale and chose my favorite princess, Snow white. No plagrisim intended Preface: My ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Would you rather....
throwdown. would you rather steal from your parents or kiss your best friend?
Jan 19, 2011
