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Re: Forget the World~1
OHMIGOSH! I love it. I seriously do. The grammar is correct, everything. You got the dialogue correct, and even made it feel believeble. You made me want to scream at ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*
done! any other takers???
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Snow- Ch. 3
This chapter was kind of a struggle for me. i know its not as good as the others XD ~pointe CLUB IS UP! I will give you cookies and milk ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*
hi Mommmy, new novel (how many times have I said that?) anyway its called Snow and is a twist of the classic snow white this is a link to chapter ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Snow- chapter 2
Here is chapter 2, I know its short, but I can't decide whats going to happen to make it twisty XD ____ Chapter II: The cool midnight breeze blew across ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Once Again
Hi! here for your requested review! first of all congrats on the green! thoughts: 1)this could easily be a novel. A very GOOD novel. Consider that.... 2) your choice of ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Would you rather....
moisturizer. would you rather never be able to read again, or only have 1 person (a person you really hate) to talk to?
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Snow- Preface and ch. 1
A twist on the classic tale Snow white. I decided to do a twist on a classic tale and chose my favorite princess, Snow white. No plagrisim intended Preface: My ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Would you rather....
throwdown. would you rather steal from your parents or kiss your best friend?
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: Hide and Seek (Chapter One)
Felix and Aiden.... Well, I can't tell which one Skins wrote (though I'm guessing its Felix) can't wait till ch. 2!
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Rach-and-Ribbit Reviews, Inc.
Hi Rach! I would love a review from you! This is my new novel called: Pens and Knives. It is an action/adventure novel with a touch (and I mean touch) ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: I think you should let me review your work. :)
Hi Pari, can you review my new novel?
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*
'ello Mother Dear! will you please review my new novel? I need the harshest you can give me! *snugs* Pointe
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Pens and Knives [Preface, Prologue and Ch. 1]
I know this is a shorter chapter, but its all I wanted to say. If I continue, it will be longer. I am planning on entering this in this contest: ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
cal, 6/10 it's cool, but a little cliche' He stood there looking through the cracked glass of the town-hall window, his breath distorting the picture of her standing there beyond ...
Jan 18, 2011