LadySpark

I honestly didn't find any nitpicks to do in this chapter. Honestly. So we are going to skip the nitpicks all together. Grammar: I really saw improvements in this chapter. ...

Hello Oth er one! It's me pointe for a review!!!! Nitpicks: 1. woke up the morning after, looking really bad. As I looked at my reflection in the mirror facing ...

Saks, I reviewed your whole portfolio! any other takers??

Hi!! here for the last chapter, so far. YEA! I have enjoyed reviewing it so much! Nitpicks: 1. pushed the covers of herself OFF herself? 2. halo. She yawned. "Good ...

Hi Saks! Right off the bat, I can tell I will have some nitpicks for this chapter. 1. Adalyn lay on the soft red couch, unable to sleep. WAIT! is ...

Hello! here for ch. 2!!! Nitpicks: 1. whoa, no nitpicks! This is so good, I have no nitpicks.. Thats a first. Well then I guess I'm off to chapter 3: ...

Hi Saks! Here to review ch. 1!!! yea! *dances* okay, lets get started. :pirate: Nitpicks: (you know how I work by now XD) 1. Aurialla lifted him up so she ...

Hi Saks! Its me again! I have decided to review all of Hazel {so far} cause I need points.XD and I love reviewing your work!!! Nitpicks: 1. The daughter of ...

Hi Saks!!!!!!! It's me pointe, here to do a review!!! So its your first attemt at poetry... *strokes beard* I'll go hard on ya' then XD Nitpicks: 1. For poppy's ...

Mikko: done!

Hi Mikko!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! here as requested!! So, I am going to do an overall, then go to our joint account and do nit-picks okay? its a win-win-win! Grammar: Pretty good, I ...

this is just a poem I wrote, spur of the moment (I know its bad>) Him Who is the one they call Him? The one who broke the Queen’s heart? ...

I haven't written poetry in a while, so I may be a little rusty. I am a coal miner's daughter. I grew up in the backwoods of West Virginia. My ...

Hello! I am Pointe and I will be reviewing you today!!! There's something in my closet, A nd it's growing quite loud , I t giggles and it scratches . ...

Tabby Done, any more takers?