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the way you move your feet when you're trying to go nowhere is a very telling thing

  • WRFF Archive Re: Bring it on! (Open)

    this is ch. 7 of the magi. PLEASE REVIEW!

    Feb 3, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*

    ch. 7 of the Magi please review!!!

    Feb 3, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Magi {Ch.7}

    I know, its been a looonnngg time since I posted. Don't hurt me please! By the way, this chapter was written a looongggg time ago. Seven “Love is patient; love ...

    Feb 3, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Would you rather....

    Big bad wolf. Him I could trick... Would you rather, find yourself trapped in the future or the past

    Feb 3, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: The One-Stop Critique Shop-- Spark's reviews *open*

    any more reviews? (requests)

    Jan 31, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: The Angel is Busy Fighting a Heavenly War as of Now *closed*

    hi! would you please review my poem The writer's pen ?? thanks in advance! ~pointe

    Jan 31, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Needs new shoes.

    Hi Big brother!!!! *gives huge hug* I have yet another poem to be reviewed. It's called the Writer's Pen. Please review *puppy dog eyes* Loffs, Lil' sis

    Jan 31, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Writers pen

    This was what came out of trying to write a book report. The first word of my book report was Star and that turned into a poem XD Enjoy, ~Loves ...

    Jan 31, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Chapter three

    20 questions isn't played like that. Once again I am going to say that this is superfical. Nice chapter though, pointe

    Jan 31, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Chapter 2

    OMG. okay. Call me harsh but I am going to be completly honest. 1. She changes clothes WAY to much 2. this is so superficial I'm sorry. YOu really are ...

    Jan 31, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Chapter one

    sorry that was an accident

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Chapter one

    hi!!I am here to review! Prologue: I don't think you need to have this. It says something that EVERYONE knows. Ch.1: 1. had him in my 4th block. you mean ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Chapter one

    hi!!I am here to review! Prologue: I don't think you need to have this. It says something that EVERYONE knows. Ch.1: 1. had him in my 4th block. you mean ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Stop and Stare (Part 2)

    hi Skinsy!!! 1)Ohmigosh!!!!!!! I love how at the very end you introduced something to make us think. 2) Wow! if I had just witnessed a murder I would be really ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Stop and Stare (Part 1)

    since everyone already did the nitpicks, I am just going to give my opinions. Wow. As always, your creativity, writing style shines through. 1) Charlie sounds like a girl. I ...

    Jan 30, 2011


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