LadySpark

Hi Big brother!!!! *gives huge hug* I have yet another poem to be reviewed. It's called the Writer's Pen. Please review *puppy dog eyes* Loffs, Lil' sis

This was what came out of trying to write a book report. The first word of my book report was Star and that turned into a poem XD Enjoy, ~Loves ...

20 questions isn't played like that. Once again I am going to say that this is superfical. Nice chapter though, pointe

OMG. okay. Call me harsh but I am going to be completly honest. 1. She changes clothes WAY to much 2. this is so superficial I'm sorry. YOu really are ...

sorry that was an accident

hi!!I am here to review! Prologue: I don't think you need to have this. It says something that EVERYONE knows. Ch.1: 1. had him in my 4th block. you mean ...

hi!!I am here to review! Prologue: I don't think you need to have this. It says something that EVERYONE knows. Ch.1: 1. had him in my 4th block. you mean ...

hi Skinsy!!! 1)Ohmigosh!!!!!!! I love how at the very end you introduced something to make us think. 2) Wow! if I had just witnessed a murder I would be really ...

since everyone already did the nitpicks, I am just going to give my opinions. Wow. As always, your creativity, writing style shines through. 1) Charlie sounds like a girl. I ...

Sean done.

review people review!!!

Hi big brother!!!!!!!!!!!! static glimmers too far whats a static glimmer? to reach for - to hold loves! 'tween aspiration and disbelief. I'm not sure if I like this part. ...

Roal done

Hello. Here as requested!! Nitpicks: 1. The boy exited his vehicle as he walked toward the house. He opened the house’s mailbox and placed the letters in. He stared at ...

I'm one of those dots of West Virginia!