LadySpark

let me just say that saying CALLING ALL CRITIQUES is really annoying. I didn't even read the post

Dear lord. I acutally laughed through out this whole thing. well, you continue singing praises of bin laden. I am going to go thank the lord that evil man is ...

moi is not beatiful. please, don't make fun!

Hi I'm pointe, and i am here to tear apart your poem sing praises of your poem MessagesIn the air , In our hair , And Everywhere . Lingering from ...

One problem with this who poem: big words. They confuzzle me. And you have a big word in every sentance. I like the idea, I like the content. just, sometimes ...

hi! okay, here to tear apart your poem sing prasies of your poem. Happy Birthday, my child! You’re now officially a teen. And according to the public, you’re impulsive and ...

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Wonderful. nuff said'

HEy ya'll! more poetry to be torn apart by you, my family :) have fun! (sniff is my least favorite and the one that was hardest to figure out ;) ...

Hey ya'll I'm back in the groove. this is my first post in over 2 months! YEAH BABY! Sing. Sing in praises of our wonderful Lord. Dance. Dance in happiness ...

hi! Welcome to the site by the way. Seeing as how your new I am going to totally tear this poem apart sing praises of this poem ;) Nitpicks We ...

okay. I love how it was from the best friends point of view. thats a vantage point you don't always get. Its very cute, and made me want to know ...

I came here to tear apart you dreams help you nicely, and I can't find anything wrong. cept for: is this how real love feels? I think it would be ...

I like 2008's version...

Okay picture: yeah thats right I wanna be a Llama!