LadySpark

Hi Shad! I'm Drama :) I would say, I'll help you whenever you need it, but you look like you're settling in nicely. :) Imma donate you some points, cause ...

Hi Raz without her icoon! Here to review! The honey melts into my ears, flowing down my throat in a sweet, serene vibration. It spills into my soul . B ...

I LOVED the second one :D

Verse 1: Daring you reach out, To grab what you can't see. Slip into that dream like state, Trying to find what isn't there. Can't you see that all you ...

People have tried to help me edit, but I really love the way it is now. So, I KNOW that it is basically repeating the same thing over and over ...

Hi Mat! Here to review... Oh. No punctuation.... I must fix... I left my path and way , to seek a new place that is fair . I went into ...

hi Dream. I'm here to review this poem!!! :D Lips of rouge, a hellish crimson. Ebony lashes over senseless orbs.

Verse 1: Stand up tall, Stand up mighty, Maybe one day You'll be like them. Never got a worry. Never got a care. Never got to worry, cause other people ...

hi! I'm drama and Imma review you today. She walks inside of me . Between shredded muscle , and fractured bone , She waits for eyes to open , Outside ...

hi!Here to review!!! You see only the sky You T aste only the air, You F eel only freedom, Okay, I see You you you you over and over again. ...

hi! I'm here to review! Voices echo in the silence , Tell of a race long ago . Standing tall among the trees , I personally don't like poems without ...

hi! Here to review! “No, you will never change!” Said so many people to me. Betrayed by God And wished by the Demon This line has a truthful beauty to ...

Hi! Here to review!!! A tight smile and warm eyes, No one knows the secrets. As much as I like this line, it didn't really pull me in. How could ...

hi! I'm here to review!!! :) They caught him, the one black as pitch, and held him against his will. He shudders amidst the fences, despondent and degraded, hanging his ...

Thanks for the comments everyone.