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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Stuck in a Chrysalis

    Hello there! LadyShadows here to give another review! First of all, I'd like to say that this really is a lovely poem. It's positive and very well meaning. For the ...

    Jun 14, 2021

  • Poetry » Other, Film
    Re: Carrie

    Hello! LadyShadows here to review! The poem was short and sweet. Although it was short, it had some pretty decent sensory language in it. Very nice. However when you write ...

    Mar 9, 2018

  • Poetry » Romantic, Humor
    Re: Wow...

    Hello! LadyShadows here to review your work! Before I get into details, I want to share my thoughts on this poem: It was not bad. In fact, I thought it ...

    Mar 9, 2018

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: Glory

    Hi again! LadyShadows, here to review! Now before I do anything nitpicky, I will safely say that this is a brilliant poem! And also very true. I want to say ...

    Mar 8, 2018

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic
    Re: Servant's Love

    Hello there! LadyShadows for a review! Now first before going into the nitpicky details of the poem, I wish to share my thoughts: This poem is BEAUTIFUL! It took my ...

    Mar 7, 2018

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: The Moon

    Hello JLCruz! This is LadyShadows, here for a review! Now, I have to say that this poem is amazing! It is a down to earth 'get to the point' kind ...

    Mar 7, 2018

  • Poetry » General, Realistic
    Re: Boredom

    Hi ElvenJedi! Here's LadyShadows to review your work :D Overall I absolutely adore this poem. It's long, but not too long, the formatting is great too, and you used lines ...

    Jul 25, 2017

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: summer in ohio

    Hello Herbgirl! LadyShadows here for a review! I loved the format of this poem. When you compared Ohio with Popsicles, it fit really well. it's like I can actually see ...

    Jul 7, 2017

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: She came to me from the Ocean

    Hello Casanova! LadyShadows here for a review! I will say I may not have a lengthy review, but here goes: I absolutely adored this poem. It was short, yet simple ...

    Feb 13, 2017

  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Re: Beer Bottle and Pills

    Hello there! LadyShadows here for a review! This...Was...Beautiful!! I can't tell you how much this poem meant to me! I may not have been in a foster home, but I ...

    Feb 13, 2017

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical
    Re: Opposition

    Hello! LadyShadows here to review! I can say that this was a refreshing poem. It was unique in my opinion, as I noticed in a lot of Christian writing that ...

    Feb 13, 2017

  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual
    Re: Untitled

    Hello there! LadyShadows here to review! I have read and reviewed the other poem '5 years of agony' and needless to say, you are not a bad writer. You need ...

    Feb 13, 2017

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic
    Re: 5 Years of Agony

    Hello Ulysses! LadyShadows here to review! I liked this poem. It was emotional, deep, and very real. It shows the message on how it is to be suffering. From anything, ...

    Feb 13, 2017

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: darkness

    Hello there! LadyShadows here for a review! I have not been on here for a few days lately, so I probably wouldn't of had an opportunity to see any of ...

    Feb 7, 2017

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: The never ending word

    Hello! LadyShadows here! I liked this poem. I know how it feels to be poor and/or begging for something in desperate need, so this poem I could definitely relate to. ...

    Feb 2, 2017


An arrow can only be shot by pulling it backwards. So when life is dragging you back with difficulties, it means that life's going to launch you into something great, so just focus and keep aiming.
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