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Re: Darker Lies-Chapter 1
"BRYLEIGH NICOLE! ARE YOU AWAKE YET?" I woke with a start to Aunt Jersey yelling from the base of the stares. I glanced at the Hello Kitty clock on my ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: A Dream
Hiya!! I liked this a lot! I loved the end when the music was playing. It needed more emotion though, thats the only thing that could have made it better, ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Project Electrocode Chapter 1
Hiya!! Great beginning! It left me with questions and wanting more. But remember to check your spelling and grammer. Your off to a great start! keep writing!!
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Darker Lies-Prologue
THEY SAY THAT YOU NEVER TRUELY LIVE UNTIL YOU HAVE FOUND SOMETHING TO DIE FOR. My name is Bryleigh Nicole Davis, and I lived for the something that could kill ...
Jun 27, 2011