LadyPurple

Rated +16 for violence. I think.... Chapter 1, Near the town of Faith there was beautiful forest. In the forest you could hear the chattering of animals as they scurry ...

Yes this happens to all of us when our minds are somewhere else. Anyway, the only errors I see is that at some parts when you should have put "you're" ...

Ok! First I just wanna show some parts that you messed up on and what they should be. The parts are in red I ' m standing here Just wonder- ...

Wow this reminds me about how my mom feels about me growing up. Awesome job isha! I really think it's a good poem (better than mine ha ha). I love ...

I enjoy staying up at night to watch storms sometimes. I wrote this one night during a storm. My room was dark at twelve A.M, except for the flashing of ...

Hi iheartbooks! OK first off in the third stanza you spelled atleast wrong. It's supposed to be: at least. with a space. Also I don't see much punctuation. That's the ...

One book I read made me think god would strike me down on the spot. Nobodys princess by I don't remember. I thought I'd like it for the fighting and ...

I've read that and all the max books. I don't get it, am I the only one who laughed when DR. H.G hacked off his pinkie and everyone was screaming? ...

I honestly can't choose between the books I liked best. Well maybe Eon: dragon eye reborn by Allison Goodman. That or every book of maximum ride by James Patterson including ...

Hello, Tinkerfee. Welcome to YWS! You know the first thing that struck me was how long this was. I mean it must have been a long dream... But I always ...

I only saw maybe a few errors. Like twice you didn't capitalize the "I"s. But with that aside I liked this. I honestly am not very good with reviews so ...

You know you're a writer when you can relate to the posts on this thread. You know you're a writer when you talk to your characters. You know you're a ...

Hey there. Nice to know that i'm not the only new person! Any-who I see a few punctuation errors. I like this but you also forgot to capitalize your "I"s. ...

Those are really pretty!

I really like this. I'm fairly new so i don't exactly know what to say. Sorry....