LadyPurple

When I clicked preview to see what I typed I found out that Retro had reviewed and posted while I was typing.... But I hope this helps anyway with punctuation. ...

Very nicely done, Solv. I'm looking forward to chapter 1.1 .

This is what I got out of F.R.E.D tonight! Welcome! You have entered [F.R.E.D.s Robotic Pad] at 9:16 pm [ladypurple] 9:16 pm: Hiya fred. [F.R.E.D.] 9:16 pm: Hi there. I ...

I think your friend is a good poem writer. I like it.

Very pretty pictures. 1. Good angle 2. Not my favorite but still it's pretty. 3. Simple but still nice. Nice close up. 4. This one is my favorite. I like ...

Hey there. I really think this is nicely written especially for a first try. It's really unique. I hope I can read this again when ever you re-write it. By ...

Ooh pretty. I'm jealous though. My yard is so tiny.

Granted, but priests appear at your door wanting to do exorcisms on them everyday. I wish I could go to Italy.

fearing that F.R.E.D would turn to music and out-do her success I did ask if he could sing and he said he could.

oooooooh pretty. The 5Th was really pretty. I like how the cloud was reflected off the water.

Hiya Pencilgirl. I gotta say I enjoyed this poem. You didn't even have spelling errors (spelling is one of my enemies by the way). Keep it up.

How are you supposed to find a robot anyway? I wanna find him so I can tell him I was fighting robots on a video game and see what his ...

Oh my gosh! *sniffles* I only talked to him once too...

Subberusnaricidaarvela Von Dracula. Don't ask where this came from. Another would be: Greatus Frostus. That one came from a pop tart box. And of course: Grrrrrrrrrr.

I cried while writing earlier when I killed off a characters husbad. I started to tear up...