LadyPurple

Ooh! I like love this poem! I agree with Becca. Your personification is good. I hope you can write more sometime. Well that's all from me. ~ladypurple

Hiya Hibiscus. I like this a lot! I'm not very good with poetry so I like to read it from people who can. I love the flow and it doesn't ...

Hiya Kylan. Yes, this is good Sunday reviewing material. I just knew Protokype would comment on this. :P Anyway, I found some spots in need of work. Y ou pronounce ...

Awesome! Last time I was somewhere where I couldn't log in. But I can do it this time!

I like the flow. Also I think the emotion is fine. I enjoyed it over all! I really did. ~Ladypurple.

Very cute, Manpuddin. I haven't seen castaway but I still like this!

Granted. But your antagonist chases you around with an ax. I wish I could have awesome purple wings.

IT. (That movie about the creepy clown.)

For stealing cookies.

I ike it the way it is. By the way thanks for telling me that you posted this. It's really nice and I hope you write more of it! Anyway ...

Hiya. I gotta say this is really pretty and creative. I just have one thing to say though. You didn't capitalize your "I"s a few times. That's all that needs ...

You have great descriptions. My favorite is: And by moonlight I'll gaze at the stars like a child in awe of Magic -- under my violet sky speckled in light ...

Thank you all!!!!!

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