LadyPurple

Hiya persephoniea. My grandpa, my dad, my mom and, my grandma use to smoke (my dad tried, but couldn't stop. My grandpa died of lung cancer.) In other words, I ...

For being right behind me.

Well it was good for a poem that you wrote back when you were twelve. Mine would've sucked back then. I like it a lot. Even if it might seem ...

I found just a few nit-picks. It's not too bad. I think it's good for a short little poem. where do I go from here? because let's be serious, I've ...

Hiya Hailyanniful. I agree with Samiam. This poem means a lot. Good job! Well, I found one problem. no on e can stop her. You left the "e" out. But ...

I don't normally like to read about a teacher-student affair (unless it's not much of an age difference.) But I kind of enjoyed this. Notre Amour Inerdit I'd love to ...

Hiya. First off, you wrote this really well. The flow is good and your descritptions are nicee. I like what it stands for. But alas...I have nothing really to say. ...

Thank you to the people who commented. I'm gonna work on descriptions in a while.

Very pretty! It looks a bit fuzzy and real bright. I like it though. Flowers are always pretty I guess. ANyway, good job Ikafe. ~Ladypurple.

Hiya Ikafe. I gotta say, I can relate an itty bit to the song. But I did find one nit-pick. Hearing the waves crush Try crash. Crush doesn't quite sound ...

Very nicely written Isha. Though it's a bit sad It's still good. Also very truthful. You have no errors (That I can find anyway.) Well that's all for now. ~Ladypurple.

Good poem Snoopysoap. I couldn't find any errors. I liked it. ~Ladypurple.

Hiya Hellokittyfreak777. There isn't much to say when others have said things already. well I like how you jump into the story but... It seems kind of vauge. I'm pretty ...

Don't be so hard on yourself, Kyllorac. It's not that bad really. I just found a little nit-pick. The pieces of self that But this part just sounds kinda weird ...

Very nice Elinor! I normally like storms for some weird reason. I like the sensory language you used. But it's summer; the rain is warm, so you won't freeze. You ...